The Tick Tock of the Clock - Comments

i just found this and its AMAZING i loved it soooooooooo much, i hope you do actually do a sequeal for it now :D

its amazing

Your story is really good, but its the fact theres grammer errors in it that gets me.
Like spelling errors, misused words, if it wasn't for that your story would be really good. :]

Wow, this story so amazing! I really loved it! Great job :D

Yes, sequel, sequel, sequel!!!
And I agree -- her calling Pete daddy is kinda creepy.

wow dude this was a great story that I hope wont end here!?
please write a sequel!!!

MY HEART STOPPED BEATING, OH MY GOD!!!!!!
YOU SHOULDN'T MESS WITH ME LIKE THAT GOLDFISH!!!
JACK KIDNAPPED?!
OMG!!!
Yes, I am crying, thank you.

How is it you always get me to cry with your stories?!
I cannot wait for the sequel.
It is going to be amazing.
I know it!

loved it!! sad its over but excited that there eventually will be a sequel, you must let me know when you start on it

Aw!
They're moving in!
AND HE SPOKE!!
That = big deal.

You have to make a sequel!

I can't believe this is the end of this story!! Please do a sequel!!

xxx

Ah, I love it :) SEQUAL!!!!

ps, plz make a sequel!

LOVED THE ENDING!

i'm ganna miss this story now!

OMFG THANK GOD THEY FOUND HIM!!!

and yay! he's finally talking to her!!

thats great!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pete is so sweet!!

Aww, he wants it to be romantic, not just because he caught the dog. lmao!
They are so cute together!

Oh my, that was soo sweet of Pete!!
I was all "awww"

I love this story :D

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwws