The Chasing of Moons - Comments

cute

Beautiful ending.

I was upset that there is only one more chapter, but then you said more and I was like fuck yeah, gimmie

Thank you so much for the update. They are finally together again !!! Am very curious how this will get wrapped up in the epilogue. Can't wait for the new stories too

Still here and go mama iero

Still here

i here please update

I'm still here, and I'm not going anywhere, but update as soon as you can please please please.

I'm still here :)

I was just thinking about this story yesterday, and was hoping for an update !! I am so happy you are continuing this one as I am still completely invested in this story, it's such an awesome idea, and I love your writing style.

yea so they really really suck wow but I totally get both of their povs. that's what I love about this fic (one of the things): the fights are totally reasonable, to the point that you don't even know whose side you're on. a lot of times in stories one of the characters will just be a stupid asshole haha. anyways yea. Frank and Gerard should totally just make out in the hallway where everyone can see and then get in trouble for pda also wow it's ending already? I guess it makes sense. I'm gonna miss it but seriously it was such a fun ride and I can't wait to read how it turns out!!:)

ok yes this is very good, you're an amazing writer

Lmao it looks like I need to learn a thing or two from Mikey Way.
"Pete Wentz!"

I am still so in love with this story. I was absolutely enchanted from as soon as I figured out what was going on and it is torture waiting for the next chapters. I'm totally with this story to the end!

Ah. Fuck I can't. Gerard will be the death of me. The cynicism that resides within that boy is astounding. He ruined a perfectly good thing right before it even really sarted. I wanted to reach through my phone and punch him in the face, oh my god. Frank has every right to be angry with him. He's an ass but then again it's not his fault that Frank knows their future is basically set in stone and he doesn't.

I will try to make this as ling as possible, because you deserve it. So I'm gonna start with my thoughts on chapter 26.

I'm, in a way, relieved that im.not the only person who still remembers the song from the Lizzie McGuire movie, like i could seriously recite the whole song to you right now, but i won't since that would take some time and you could easily just search it up.

I also appreciate the fact that instead of doing a time lapse from chapter 25 to chapter 26 (like most authors to my demise) you did a continuation. You're actually going step by step in their relationship and hopefully you'll show us how their relationship gradually progresses through the chapters. I have come across a lot of fanfics where once they find out their feelings for eachother the author would immediately time lapse like 10 years, to usually have them marry, and it honestly frustrates me, because i wanna know how they got to that point in their life. So, really thank you for taking your time on this story.

For chapter 27 I really liked how you threw Pete and Mikey into the mix, although i was kinda bummed to find out Pete is still oblivious to Mikeys attempts on trying to make him get the hint. I really hope they get together soon though. Also how you described Gerard's room is really similar to mine, but without the clothing obstacles.

Honestly, the Joan Jett and Taylor Swift pun were really horrible, but made me laugh, so please make more horrible puns. Maybe throw in a meme or something, that'd be great. Your story is still going strong and im enjoying every second i read it. Its really good so please keep going. Also, for Hayley William's hair color i totally agree with you and if i had to choose a second it'd be when she dyed it half pink half red-orange.

YES I DONT HAVE WORDS BECAUSE YES

I giggled too much lol

@ GalacticGun
Oh gosh, so I'm just so happy right now after reading that it made me literally just feel so much pride in what I've written and you have no idea how much it means to me for someone to say that, because it's honestly everything.

So, like, just do not be self conscious about how long it was, there is literally nothing I love more than long comments, they're the most fun to read and mean the most, so really, thank you so much for everything you said.

And, I mean, if there's any hope in the world that I can become an author someday than I will do everything in the world to chase after it, because there's nothing I want more. I want to be an author so much it hurts, and fanfiction is honestly one of the best outlets I've ever found, because it's almost better than being a real author, because it's so much more, uh, I guess honest. Fewer barriers between me as a writer and you as a reader, it makes everything feel really great, and this is the best part to be honest, seeing people's responses and knowing that people enjoy it, is what makes it so much better, so thank you so much.

okay so, this may be a little long and won't make any sense in the beginning but it will in the end just bear with me, please.

Everytime I am presented to a new character, story, show, book etc. most of the time i would look at it and sort of brush it off as just another one of the many that there are, because it's true, but then there's like a trait, an appeal or attraction that would usually make me think 'I wanna know/read more of this certain thing' and when i do that it always ends with me becoming addicted. I end up loving that certain thing so much it hurts me. Your stories have that exact effect on me. You word them all so perfectly and they all have a perfect timing. You know how to describe feelings and don't overuse words. My vocabulary is way better now than it has ever been, I love your stories so much It's gotten to the point where I have to remind myself not to cry because it's all just fictional and nothing like that has ever really happened, but you make it feel so real. My point is you're fucking awesome and should become an author some day, because your stories are the shit. Like seriously, publish a book or something.
(I really hope i didnt misspell anything, its hard typing on mobile)

okay so, this may be a little long and won't make any sense in the beginning but it will in the end just bear with me, please.

Everytime I am presented to a new character, story, show, book etc. most of the time i would look at it and sort of brush it off as just another one of the many that there are, because it's true, but then there's like a trait, an appeal or attraction that would usually make me think 'I wanna know/read more of this certain thing' and when i do that it always ends with me becoming addicted. I end up loving that certain thing so much it hurts me. Your stories have that exact effect on me. You word them all so perfectly and they all have a perfect timing. You know how to describe feelings and don't overuse words. My vocabulary is way better now than it has ever been, I love your stories so much It's gotten to the point where I have to remind myself not to cry because it's all just fictional and nothing like that has ever really happened, but you make it feel so real. My point is you're fucking awesome and should become an author some day, because your stories are the shit. Like seriously, publish a book or something.
(I really hope i didnt misspell anything, its hard typing on mobile)