Angel - Comments

I hope this updates soon!

Eek! Matty should rip Zacky a new one lol

Loved this. Please update again soon coz I can't wait to find out what Matt'll say to Zacky.

Love can't wait for an update

Love can't wait for an update

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Thank you all!
I am planning on updating this story again before the end of this weekend!

I really hope you continue this story!!! I loved it last time and I was so sad when I couldn't find it when j went to re-read it :(

Great story cant wait for more

What a lovely, heartwarming story. I love this so much and can't wait for more. Please update again as soon as you can xxx

Chapter 2

This chapter was definitely hitting me right in the feels.
The atmosphere is slowly building up for this story, which basically sets in a very gloomy theme but then again, there is a hint of hope within this entire atmosphere that makes me wonder when the worst of it will come by and make way for the best. Obviously things are only going to get more stressful for Matt and much more uncomfortable for "Angel". I am very anxious to see how all of that turns out with each passing chapter.

The emotions from Matt and Evita are very powerful by how I am able to visualize the expressions on their faces and how they reacted to the situation with "Angel". Poor girl :(

Wonderful job, sweetie. I can't wait for more!
Don't let those stupid haters get you down because they can't get what they want, boo hoo. Do what you want to do that's best for your writing and trust me, this is a beautiful story so far :)

Yes, first one to comment lol
This story I really bringing an amazing head start to a great plot. The mysterious appearance of this girl is excitingly drawing my interest to find out what happened to get her so destroyed and on the streets to freeze to death. The raw emotion is present in Matt by how you described it, along with the reactions that the girl made to his presence. It's obvious that something went horribly wrong that will probably be way over Matts mind when he tries to figure it out. It won't help by the fact that he's dealing with Hell from his personal life to add on with it all. Makes me really wonder how his friends and family are going to react...and worry about how his ex-wife will take it.

Amazing start lovely and welcome back!!! :D