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  • OnCriticalVeinz

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    Freshmen year was bullshit for me tbfh I hated majority of my teachers...
    My fucking Spanish teacher last semester fucking made me get up and read something out to the rest of the class and fucking perform it, I WAS CRYING AND SHAKING SOOO HARD AND HE MADE ME DO IT BC IT WAS FOR A 'GRADE' FUCK THE GRADE MAN... IF I CAN'T BREATH BC IM HAVING AN ANXIETY ATTACK FUCK YOU MAN
    tbh English has always been my strongest subject in school... And history and music and art....
    I always try going above and beyond for certain classes and when I do I feel like don't appreciate it enough and it fucking upsets me sooooo bad bc I put my heart and soul into this and they just turn it down and give me a shit grade like?!???
    My school, teachers and grading system are so fucking backwards it's not even funny and I hate it... I'm just glad I graduate in a month
    May 8th, 2015 at 09:29pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    lOL MY NINTH GRADE ENGLISH TEACHER RUINED MY LIFE LOL SHE FAILED ME FOR THREE SEMESTERS BC SHE DIDNT LIKE ME LOL I STILL GET BLAMED BY MY FAMILY LMFAO BC APPARENTLY I DIDN'T TRY ENOUGH HAHA THE HONOR ROLL STUDENT JUST DECIDED SHE DIDN'T CARE FOR ALL OF ONE FUCKING CLASS LMAO YEAH MY FAULT HAHA I HAD TO BUST MY FUCKING ASS MORE THAN USUAL FOR AN ENTIRE YEAR JUST SO THAT I COULD RAISE MY GPA TO A 3.0 L O L
    fucking bitch
    she made me cry like bawl my fucking eyes out cry in front of multiple people at the fucking school on more than one occasion and they still wouldn't switch me out of her class
    i still get fired up just thinkin about her
    I WENT ABOVE AND BEYOND WHAT SHE ASKED BUT I WAS ALWAYS THE ONE IN THE WRONG
    she's actually jack and alex's english teacher in can't help who i fall for lol fun fact
    oh duuuude so i wrote a paper comparing the rocky horror picture show and the girl who was plugged in (grade a story i would deffs recommend) to modern society for comm and it was shit okay like not thought through, i barely skimmed over it before submitting it, i didn't heed any of his suggestions on how to make it better (which was really just me saying "yeah i'm not sure if i even have topic sentences" and him skimming the first page before saying "well, make this part right here a new paragraph and then make sure that the first sentences of each paragraph prove that, which'll prove your thesis"), and yesterday on my way out of his exam he stopped me to tell me that "that was a very good paper, by the way" and i got 100 on it like "dude we even readin the same thing or"
    May 8th, 2015 at 09:19pm
  • OnCriticalVeinz

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    My ninth grade English teacher told me at one point that I deserved to be in advanced prgrammed English classes because of how well I write and it kinda made me happy bc I've ALWAYS thought I was a hORRIBLE author/writer no matter what I'm writing about, whether it's fanfic or not...
    My tenth grade english and music teacher have read like one of my stories and shockingly there was no smut in either of those too and they enjoyed them...
    I actually wrote an essay for some stupid end of course thing they had us do last year in my junior English class about ATL and there was a bit of gayness in it and somehow I got distinguished?
    And now this year in my senior English class, my teach has always encouraged me to write because she's read a few of my stories and she's always given good feedback...

    Idek...
    And tbh that's okay... I talk about myself a lot too lmao
    May 8th, 2015 at 09:04pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i had my tenth grade teacher read my first one shot, and it was based off of of monsters and men's song little talks so it was sad aF and after she read it she was like "oh my goodness so was he having a hallucination? oh did this mean this? that symbolized this, right?" and it was so awk having to say "no, there's no symbolism that i'm aware of... he was depressed and killed himself... that's it"
    then my digital design teacher had us write stories based off of a piece of art by some guy idr who and that's where my second one shot came from and it was cute and i still love it even tho it wasn't gay at all it was just adorable
    then my french teacher in tenth grade had us write stories based off of beauty and the beast and it was supposed to be like a paragraph long but mine was like five pages and gay as fUck
    and then my eleventh grade English teacher was like "i would love to one day write something with you" and it was like "aw thank you aw"
    my comm teacher just a few weeks ago asked what kind of writing i liked to do bc i said his course was kinda boring like i didn't mean to i just didn't hear his question and nodded and he had me meet with him about it and i was like "creative writing is more my thing" and he asked me what kind of stories i write and it was sO embarrassing saying "oh, y'know, just, like... silly, little love stories... with no real purpose... just kinda... yeah..."
    in less than two weeks he'll be my creative writing teacher so ha can't wait to see what happens there
    he thinks i'm a great writer thus far so hopefully i don't disappoint

    i talk about myself a lot i'm sorry i don't mean to it just happens?????
    May 8th, 2015 at 08:53pm
  • OnCriticalVeinz

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    I JUST FINISHED UPDATING THE LAST CHAPT TO HFD AND IT'S MOSTLY FLUFF UGH AND I HATE IT
    But, I know that feel bc teachers at my school always misjudge me or smthn smdh and when I tell them I like to write stories they're all like 'omg really what are they about?' and just.... My response is usually the awkward 'uMmm... Gay stories?' and I actually had a teacher read one of my fluff and she said it was good... So maybe I am okay with writing fluff idek man
    May 8th, 2015 at 08:15pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    omg ok story time so last fall semester i had a sociology teacher who used to ask "daily questions" and toward the end one of them was smth like "tell us something about yourself that would surprise us all" so when it got to me i was like "i don't know i really like serial killers i guess" and like i figured that'd be surprising bc it was warmer so i was always wearing pretty dresses and gorgeous heels and like i was always lookin cute and little and stuff y'know and he was like "yeah we know try again" like wtf i mentioned a serial killer statistic all of once in that class, it wouldntve been surprising in comm bc i actually wrote a paper defending some serial killers so i was like "uh... i write love stories a lot" and everyone was like "what no you don't" bc i'm a bItch and like such a cunt about all things relationship like i used to call my friend a pussy bc he would be like "me and my gf have already started a disney movie collection!!" like dude you are sUch a little bitch and so my teacher was like "wow really now. how many have you written?" and i laughed and was like "too many. wELL over 100" and my friend was like "do you really?" and it was like "dude the sappier and stupider and cuter the better."

    i fUCKING LOVE FLUFF UGH
    in all my time i've written maybe two good smuts
    my fluff is always on point af
    May 8th, 2015 at 07:56pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    I used to be vvv good at writing fluff but when I figured out how to properly write smut, I switched... I haven't written fluff in so long I'm scared I'll suck at it...
    May 8th, 2015 at 06:48pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i get so many ideas for smut but i'm shit at the execution part of it
    fluff and death are where i'm at my best
    May 8th, 2015 at 06:00pm
  • OnCriticalVeinz

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Yes bruh... Omfg like, how do they even come up with those crazy as'f ideas for smut? It makes me wanna cry and just sit there in my sorrows...
    Tbh, I write mostly smut bc it's the only thing I can write properly tbfh ... Fluff is easy but just... No.
    May 8th, 2015 at 05:13pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i'm babe (used to be baby idk now gabe is baby w/e idgaf) and now it's sunshine girl which i don't understand too much but i like it
    ugh god people who can write grade a+++++ smut every single time need to chill tf out
    people who write a+++++ all the time need to stOp ugh
    May 8th, 2015 at 04:26pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    My friends call me either the queen of smut or a sexual deviant and I'm just like, nah bruh. I'm not that great. There are better authors than me out there. Wtf no.
    May 8th, 2015 at 03:23pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    rian knows exactly what i write
    she loves it but she also turns around and teases me about it like wtf
    May 8th, 2015 at 03:05pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Sammmme... Apparently being a virgin gives off a vibe that you're innocent...
    Tbh if my friends actually knew me they'd know how much of a deviant I actually am...
    Idek man
    I may be 'innocent' but I still write the gayest shit ever
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:54pm
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    i'm supposed to be the innocent one
    bc being a virgin means someone's innocent u kno
    innocent af that's me
    but i also have like
    two friends so the odds of being told anything are slim as it is
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:48pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    My friends tell me things even when I don't ask them... I could simply say 'hey' and majority of my friends are like 'omg guess what me and my bf/gf did'
    I have some special friends tbh...
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:40pm
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    i wish i had friends who'd tell me shit
    i tried to have rian tell me what going down on a girl is like and the only answer i got was "google it" like wtf that doesn't help me at all
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:35pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    I googled my research tbh... Plus I had a friend tell me a few things bc he's a kinky piece of shit...
    And ps thanx babe, that makes me happy knowing I'm not a complete failure with writing smut jfc
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:28pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    mine needs to be redone so it's not shit ok yours was not shit sh

    but psst cock rings don't stop guys from coming and most guys find that they come sooner and they don't hurt, it just keeps them hard so in case they have like premature ejaculation problems then they can keep going for their partner k i did a good deal of research on this
    May 8th, 2015 at 02:04pm
  • OnCriticalVeinz

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Idek man... Ive read your GO and I loved it... I don't like mine .-. I even said so in my authors note...
    But then again; it's like four in the morning here where I am and I've gotten no sleep so... Mistakes were made... O o p s
    May 7th, 2015 at 09:51am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i don't even wanna read this, it's probs like 509909079629629x's better than my game over
    May 7th, 2015 at 09:43am