Just Look at the Mess You Made - Comments

  • fifthghost

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    @ kyleburns
    I KNEW YOU WOULD SAY THAT BUT GOD I HATE YOU. I don't. I do. But I don't. But I DO.

    To be honest, I made up my own sequel in my head last night. It was both happy and sad and I'm so hormonal that I ended up crying.

    I kind of like asshole John too? It is hot in a weird way. Confident asshole John, all the opposites of real life, hahaha.
    July 6th, 2015 at 02:49pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ johncorneliusocv
    I'm slightly sorry you're unhappy, but also not. That was my intention. Happy fics are so overdone, I love unhappy endings. I haven't even thought about the sequel. (That's a small lie...but with the way I'm thinking it probs won't be sunshine and rainbows, sorry.)

    I like asshole John. Imo he's definitely not irl, but you know. In my college verse AU, he definitely is.

    Thanks for the comment. :)
    July 6th, 2015 at 04:21am
  • fifthghost

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    I AVOIDED READING THIS FOR SO LONG BC I KNEW IT WOULD HURT ME AND IT DID. IT WAS GREAT BUT I'M VERY UNHAPPY. IF THE SEQUEL IS NOT SUNSHINE AND RAINBOWS I WILL CRY.

    ALSO JOHN'S AN ASSHOLE.
    July 5th, 2015 at 10:27pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ lacemoonz
    Thank you!! I'm thinking of writing a sequel! And yes Callakarth is the best ship. :) Thanks again for your comment. I really appreciate it!!
    May 2nd, 2015 at 05:53pm
  • lacemoonz

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    ahh this was amazing. callakarth is the best ship, haha. write a sequel, yeah?
    May 2nd, 2015 at 09:23am
  • Forever Young.

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    Haha this ship is my life now basically like I have Devil Wears Prada still happening and yet also working on a baseball AU??? So really it's my pleasure giving this ship life I don't see myself stopping any time soon lol
    April 28th, 2015 at 06:49am
  • kyleburns

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    @ Forever Young.
    Ahh!! Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading and leaving a comment. :)) Thank you for bringing this ship to life, honestly. It's the best thing ever.
    April 27th, 2015 at 01:42am
  • Forever Young.

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    omg I was so delayed in reading this because I'm just really so lazy lately and now I regret taking so long because I loved it. Obviously. because I love basically everything you write.
    <333
    April 26th, 2015 at 10:06pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ stopitlilly
    Thank you! I probably will write one! :*
    April 19th, 2015 at 02:08pm
  • stopitlilly

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    Please write a sequel this is so good!
    April 19th, 2015 at 12:19am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    honestly tho. "my bf cheated but it wasn't his fault, it was literally everyone else's fault."
    but then alex ugh he should've tried to uphold communication during the break and then maybe shit woulda been different ugh boys are stupid
    i can't even be mad at john rn tho bc i'm listening to american candy??? and i like it too much to let my upset w him get in the way of it?? ugh

    ofc bae ily2 :*
    April 18th, 2015 at 11:36pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Haha! I don't even know why I picked Chick-Fil-A, because I don't eat there????
    They are idiots, esp Garrett.

    Thanks for reading. :* Ily.
    April 18th, 2015 at 10:43pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i don't trust people who eat at chick-fil-a anyway.
    but forreal tho garrett and alex are both fucking idiots. once a cheater always a cheater. nah, fuck that. bye john bye.
    April 18th, 2015 at 10:33pm
  • SchitzoFranic

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    @ kyleburns
    I didn't mean like Jalex xD i meant like the become friends or something.
    April 13th, 2015 at 04:37pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ SchitzoFranic
    Thank you! I was going for sad!! If I write the sequel, I can tell you there won't be Jalex, haha. I am not a big fan of Jalex. But, I do kinda have an idea in mind for the sequel, if I get some more feedback for this story!
    April 13th, 2015 at 03:04pm
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    @ kyleburns
    No problem! It's a really good fic, sad but good. I think alex should gain some confidence too and realize that everything that happened wasn't his fault. :/ maybe jack or someone new could point that out o:
    April 13th, 2015 at 02:14am
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    @ SchitzoFranic
    Haha, I had a feeling someone would point that out. :) Maybe, if I write the sequel that'll happen! Thanks for the comment, love!! I really do appreciate it!
    April 13th, 2015 at 12:44am
  • SchitzoFranic

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    I think Johns an asshole and deserved that, cause technically alex did tell him no and then was swayed into it. Hell, John knew he was a kinda virgin and still went for it. I Would think he'd get into cheating again, get caught, and garret be done for good.
    April 12th, 2015 at 09:42pm