Hit Me Baby One More Time - Comments

@ cinderblock-gardenx
This is cute af omg. Thank-you?!!? And it's okay we can pretend Pat/Garrett happens.

@ johncorneliusocv

thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! I love that headcannon omg I wish I would've thought of that

and okay, not gonna lie, I was already pumped about the long comment but when I saw it was you I threw my phone across the room. is that weird? you were one of the first atl blogs I ever followed on tumblr and were one of the reasons I got into fanfiction. so excuse me while I die

That was awesome! And so funny, I laughed so many times. Your smuts were good, especially considering you said they were your first! I guess my only recommendation for people wanting to get better is not to fall into cliches that you read in every single smut; branch out with your description and be brave! Or be dirtier. People would probably enjoy it. But, no, honestly, really well done.

I also like how the second part was more of a little domestic!AU where they're just living life. I'm a sucker for a happy ending all round too.

BUT I HAVE A LITTLE HEADCANON THAT LONELY PAT FROM THE FIRST PART GETS TOGETHER WITH GARRETT NGL. THEY MOVE TO WASHINGTON AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER AND FLY BACK OVER EVERY FEW MONTHS TO SEE CALLAKARTH. OR THEY FLY OVER THERE. FRIEND VACATIONS WOO.

But yeah, rambling. Honestly, really good, and I love how different it was. Great job!

@ Supersonicskyline
thank you so much! you're too sweet :)

this was brilliant you should write more of these two love them!

@ JamieAllOver.
I'm glad you liked it!

merrikat is nice and all
but merrigreuter and barawarz are better

anywho
this was cute aw and then they stay together forever

@ lacemoonz
thanks! I'm working on the second part and my goal is go update before Monday! I don't know if that'll actually happen but still haha

@ hottestchocolate
thank you so much!!! I'm so glad people like it!

@ hottestchocolate
thank you so much!!! I'm so glad people like it!

I reaaaalllllyyyy loved this and can't wait to read the second part omg

ooh I really liked this! you have a great writing style and the plot for this is awesome too! just maybe go easy on the caps but otherwise I totally can't wait for part two! wow!!

ok now two of my favorite writers have commented on my fic. be cool, be cool thank you!!

8/10 would recommend to an enemy or maybe a friend who was pissin me off

but totes not jells that forever young. acknowledged u bc ugh

Aw this was so good! Nice job :))

yeah honestly I don't know what inspired me to write such a sad horrible fic but hey it was still good right? haha

well i've now binged on u and i need more
more not sad shit
i cant do that to myself a gain goddamn it
gonna go read my own happy cancer fic to recover from that low ass blow

but I seriously love your fics! a little while ago I even went on a binge of your writing! you're better than you think you are :)

man, the first like hundred things i've posted have sucked
even tho i've only posted like 96 things. just predicting the future for myself.
ugh, god, same. two and a half years and i'm still only in the beginning stages of writing. kms. and then there are so many other things. i kinda just hop around from uncompleted fic to uncompleted and nothing ever gets finished.

thank you so much!! you don't want to read my first fanfic that I posted on wattpad. it's so awful and you'll never want to read my writing again haha but I get the writing thing, with this fic I either stayed up until 1am writing or I didn't touch it for two weeks.