I love your story, there were a few errors in your tying, but mostly just typos. I love your story and actually inspires me to write a whole new stry of my own, but I better wait until I finish the ones I've started. Great story and please update soon.
Hey, just wanted to say that your story is amazing. I couldn't find grammar errors, they were all long which is a plus, and it actually had a plot! I loved it, so I just hope you update soon. :]