The Last Time - Comments

are you still updating this? x

Aw. :(
So sad. I feel so bad for Mallory. :(
I have a feeling on why Camilla is looking familiar... :////
For the record I like the name Mallory better tbh. I'm sure Camilla doesn't have anything on her. :) If the reason she looks familiar is what I'm thinking... XD
But I guess this is very biased since I'm for Mallory.
Great job with the update though. I love how perfect this story is and it's still just the beginning. I didn't say this before but I also love the original plot line to it. I haven't come across an AG fan fic that has done something like this before. :)

OMG NEW STORY.
I stumbled across your profile again today and found this... and oh my gosh, for only having two chapters, I am already obsessed. This is seriously so good already OMG.
You definitely need to continue. I will be here to read if you do. I sincerely love this already.
It's amazing how much emotion you were able to put in it already. Usually authors take a lot longer to get that emotional tie going in the story... but you have beaten odds.
Recommended because of this amazingness. And subscribed! :D

@ Can You Fix My Heart
Haha thanks!!! I'm working on an update, I hope to have it posted by this weekend at the latest! Super stoked that you like it though, that makes me so happy!

You reallllllyyyyy should update!! Not just cause this is the first story I've read on this site in ages and I'm literally craving more already... Mostly that... But also cause its freakin AMAZING and I want to see where things go and why he canceled on her!!