Untold Misfortunes - Comments

Looking forward to more soon.

I'm glad they've got ivy back but I don't trust Luka. Please update again soon xxx

@ AJ9
Aw! Yay! Thank you! Hopefully, there will be another update within the day.

Loved it. I didn't think the sex scene was bad at all. I thought you did a good job. Can't wait for more of this. Please update again soon xxx

I liked both updates I feel they where both a little short and the one in Jimmy pov was more of a recap since it hadn't been so long since Ivy just told all of that to Gates not to many chapters back but I am glad he is awake and am very curious to see where the story and your writing goes specially when you get in to the more interesting parts...

Much ♡ Kat

Please update again soon. This story is so addictive. I can't wait to find out what'll happen next! Xxx

@ Corey Lee
I'm so happy that you get excited! I get excited when I see how much you and everyone else like my story! Thank you for the comment!

Aww, Brian came to her rescue and he knows everything now. I'm glad Matt came too. I hope they find Luka and I can't wait to see what they do to him. I hope they sort him out properly. Also, I really hope Jimmy will be ok. Please update again as soon as you can. xxx

This is so good! I get so excited when I check my e-mail and see an update for your story! :)

So intense! I hope Matt comes to save her! But if he does will it be too late? Will Luka kidnap her or just cut her up and leave her there as s threat? If that's the case either way will Matt find her? Do any of the boys know about the abuse/ will they find out? What if jimmy wakes up? You don't need to answer any of the questions, I hope they give you some helpful ideas/ directions to go with the story :) just me thinkin. You're story is good! Update soon please!

Wow I hope matt shows up like seriously how can he not put two and two together why else would she have just said him like duh.

Hope for an update soon I am in love.

Much ♡ Kat

Oh no! He found her! Why didn't she tell Matt who was after her? Mind you, Matt should've worked it out. I hope he comes to his senses and rescues her quickly; she needs him now, more than ever. Please update this again as soon as you can x

The fuck Matt!? Way to be a dick bro. Love the story so far Hun. Keep up the great work! :) <3

Arrrrg. Cliff hanger. Matt better man up. She heard about Jimmy. I hope she doesn't forget. You're on a roll with this story. Keep it up. You're doing an amazing job.

Arrrrg. Cliff hanger. Matt better man up. She heard about Jimmy. I hope she doesn't forget. You're on a roll with this story. Keep it up. You're doing an amazing job.

@ AJ9
And what will you do if he does nothing? Muhahaha!

Please update again soon cos I'm dying to know what Matt is gonna do.

@ Leaving Memories
Nooooooooooo! Please don't do that .... I can't take the suspension. Please update soon xxx

@ AJ9
Muhahaha!! Maybe I'll update today... Maybe I should draw out the suspension a bit?