Medicate - Comments

This is great; I love how the summary is from the printout that tells you all the drug information of what you're being prescribed. That's a nice touch (and informational.) I've had to take quite a bit of pain/anxiety medication and had a lot of panic attacks in the last few months and the way you describe everything seems really accurate.

The whole time I was reading all I could do was wonder why he was in a withdrawal; why he had been taking something like that for so long. You did really well with building the feeling of frustration and again with building the feeling of terror.

Overall, this was really good.

A few things stood out to me as odd so it would be nice to have some background as to why he was taking the Oxy, and how long he had been off of it. 1. His anger seemed, to me, to go from developing normally to extremely dramatic; 2. The abusive turn the story took seemed slightly out of place - had he gotten like this before? is his general anger harsher than average? The trippy layout is a nice touch but seems fitting for something like LSD; I would have figured a darker look for this.

@ JamieAllOver.
I loved his long hair phase tbh but none of hi clothes fit him lmao

@ stopitlilly
idk if he was a real druggie, but he sure as hell looked like one. when his hair was blonde and long and greasy and disgusting and he looked like his clothes came from a dumpster. it lasted like a year i think. he stopped w it before english girls was released.

This is really, really good. Did John really have a druggie faze? I mean, based on his tweets, it doesn't surprise me, but I had no idea tbh.

@ kyleburns
thank you bae :**

@ jalex_barakarth3012
it is not, no

@ mae_lissa
thanks, doll!

@ Forever Young.
thanks, glad you liked it!

Woah this was great! Loved it:)

Loved this!!!

is this going to have a sequel
bc i feel like it should have a sequel
but i dig the end

I lovedddd this!