Chapter 4 really tugged at my heart. The guys need to quit talkin about her with each other and talk with her about stuff. I have a feelin she's gonna run, and to be honest, I can't say I blame her.
Incredible, incredible, incredible. <3 <3 So happy to see you writing again, and this new story is not only your best work yet, but it has so much potential. I'm super excited about it.