Silver Spirits - Comments

What a great ending =D

THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.

Ugh, action, thriller, romance all in one. I loved it.

The more I read the more Im sure Id be nosebleed lolol
On the plus side, it seems Id be basically imortal xD
Cant wait to read more and see how the sword fight ends!!

Fuck i did it again. Sorry

This feels like it should be the next pirates of the carribean movie.
You know, if pirates of the carribean had laser guns and flying ships.
Good job, cant wait to read more

This feels like it should be the next pirates of the carribean movie.
You know, if pirates of the carribean had laser guns and flying ships.
Good job, cant wait to read more

BEN DIED?

I thought he'd just be unconscious for a while. Oh my, oh my.

ignore this

I relate deeply with nosebleed. I feel that if I were ever a character in a pirate novel, as much as I'd like to be the beautiful heroine, I'd be nosebleed lol

Just read this from start to finish in one sitting and I love it! I couldn't have been pried from my computer screen if there was a gun to my head. I was entirely lost in the world you created and when I caught up to where you are now I was sad to be dropped back into reality. Amazingly written do far, can't wait to read more!

loved chapters 1-6 was only going to read a chapter or 2 but im hooked and i can't stop reading it

loved chapters 1-6 was only going to read a chapter or 2 but im hooked and i can't stop reading it

(Thanks Mibba! This was a repeated comment) I love this story.

I wonder what will happen to our dear Simon =D

I am LOVING this. I'm on chapter 9 atm and I have to say that I wouldn't mind jumping Ben's bones. And I love the concept of a female pirate. Yas for females in positions of powerrrrrrr

Loving this, keep it up!

Oh my god! What if she is Madeline!???

I feel like I'm on to something here!!!

You are doing great and I can't wait to read the next update. :)

@ Michael Westen
Thanks for pointing out those typos! I'll get to fixing them as soon as I'm near a computer. Glad you like the story~

Holy moly. That was such a great first chapter. I love how it starts, just barely out of the thick of it. The imagery is so good, your descriptions really do put me at sea. Not to mention the flow, it's so effortless. I'm definitely going to subscribe and recommend.

A few things I took note on:

"He winced as he was rolled onto his back by a boot, now facing the man." - Nothing wrong, just absolutely love the imagery of it.

I love how he was then forcibly made to sit up. It speaks to Percy's character. (Speaking of Percy, after reading the entire chapter, he's in the running for my favorite. I can't wait to see where you go with him.)

"Clemens squirmed where he was pinned to the mast" I feel like there wasn't any pretense to this, he was just all of a sudden pinned.

And then we have these few typos that I caught:

"the ship beside them sink slowly" sank slowly.

"The crowd when silent" went

"a half mile" smile

Again, I can't wait to read more of this!