May 13th, 2015 at 02:47pm
@ Albluerose
Thank you! I do space them out on Word but when I post sometimes it doesn't want to do it. I'm trying to fix it lol but its not working too much.
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May 13th, 2015 at 12:19pm
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@ Albluerose
Thank you! I do space them out on Word but when I post sometimes it doesn't want to do it. I'm trying to fix it lol but its not working too much.May 13th, 2015 at 12:18pm -
I really like where this is going, so far so good. :) I like her witty comments while Loki's slave. Try and make sure not to make the paragraphs overly long or when you do space them out. :) other then you're doing great.May 13th, 2015 at 05:43am
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aawe he's so cute when he blushes
can't even imagine how confused he must be by all of the new things all around him though.. poor thing
May 12th, 2015 at 06:06pm -
aawe!
heh, was just about to say that the two first chapters were so cute- but then I remembered that uh, no chapter one wasn't all cute.. had it's moments though 
gonna be interesting to see how their friendship will hold up- with him being ''asleep'' for those 70 years that she's been awake and living life- seeing peggy get old, get married and all that.... will he hold a grudge for some reason? though, it's steve, he's probably too sweet for that
May 11th, 2015 at 11:03am
aawe loki took over her mind.. poor cap- or maybe not I mean he couldn't really complain about her purring in his ear and stuff- right??
hah, I could totally see his wide eyed look when she came out in her outfit.. if he hadn't been a supersolider i'm sure he'd had a stroke