“Captain. Unconscious crazy Agent Carson.” hahahahah that was funny aawe loki took over her mind.. poor cap- or maybe not I mean he couldn't really complain about her purring in his ear and stuff- right?? hah, I could totally see his wide eyed look when she came out in her outfit.. if he hadn't been a supersolider i'm sure he'd had a stroke
@ Albluerose Thank you! I do space them out on Word but when I post sometimes it doesn't want to do it. I'm trying to fix it lol but its not working too much.
@ Albluerose Thank you! I do space them out on Word but when I post sometimes it doesn't want to do it. I'm trying to fix it lol but its not working too much.
I really like where this is going, so far so good. :) I like her witty comments while Loki's slave. Try and make sure not to make the paragraphs overly long or when you do space them out. :) other then you're doing great.
aawe! heh, was just about to say that the two first chapters were so cute- but then I remembered that uh, no chapter one wasn't all cute.. had it's moments though gonna be interesting to see how their friendship will hold up- with him being ''asleep'' for those 70 years that she's been awake and living life- seeing peggy get old, get married and all that.... will he hold a grudge for some reason? though, it's steve, he's probably too sweet for that
aawe loki took over her mind.. poor cap- or maybe not I mean he couldn't really complain about her purring in his ear and stuff- right??
hah, I could totally see his wide eyed look when she came out in her outfit.. if he hadn't been a supersolider i'm sure he'd had a stroke