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I loved it! I think you wrapped it up really well. I was a bit surprised by the little scene with Toshiya. Nice to know he didn`t plan on being a jerk forever. And the parts with Saya and Kyo were adorable. I couldn`t imagine having to go through what Die did. Especially with a kid that looks exactly like their mother. I`m glad you made it a happy ending though. And I definitely did not expect you to have it tied into another story. And one that was a bit heartbreaking, if I remember correctly. All in all, I loved it and I`m kind of upset its over.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thank you for reading! I'm sorry it was so heart wrenching :( I promise the ending will be memorable! I don't think it will be tragic, but it may still be heart wrenching-I haven't quite decided how to tie it all up yet! But thank you for your input, I'll definitely keep it in mind while I'm writing! I may come up with an alternate ending or epilogue, because there are a few ways I'd like to tie up Rhu and Saya's stories...I promise this isn't the end of them :) I'm also a fan of Kyo's odd proposal :p haha I thought it was kind've perfect for him-he's not the best at communicating his feelings through spoken words-I think he does it best via writing/lyrics (at least the Kyo in this story! haha) So...there's one happy ending! :p

No more heart wrenching chapters! I beg of you! Cause that is exactly what this chapter was. Please don`t kill Rhu or the baby. That would really suck. Sorry, I can be a sucker for happy endings. I did like that you put in Die`s point of view and the end surprised me. I definitely did not expect Saya to accept Kyo`s odd proposal. I am happy that she did though.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the early update! :D I felt bad for the last one having been sooooooo late! I can't wait to post the next one-I hope what I have in store for everyone isn't disappointing. I'm still struggling with the final chapter...I'm hoping it's not posted late :/

Yay! An early update! It kind of figures though that the day I don`t check for updates, you update. Ah, my luck. I loved the interaction between Kyo and Saya. And the snippet into Kyo`s thoughts about Saya in the past was a bit surprising but I liked it. I`m so worried about Rhu! Something tells me that whatever happens with her and the baby will either make or break her and Die. I hope it`s the former instead of the latter. And I can`t believe this only has two chapters left! It`s such a great story I don`t want it to end.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thanks for reading! I actually just updated again :p hahaha Yeah I think Rhu is a bit suspicious of her father as well-who could blame her? I think he has good intentions tho-he's finally thinking clearly and has a lot of guilt to come to terms with. Family is the most important thing, so he's probably just trying to mend that :) I hope you like the next chapter! Only two remaining!!!!!

Yay! Early update! I feel so bad for Die and Rhu. Being a single mother has got to suck. And her dad suddenly coming back in her life kind of irks me and makes me feel like he`s up to no good. But that`s probably just me. I am, however, happy to read Saya and Kyo interacting again. I wonder what will happen during their time together. I can`t wait to read the next chapter!

@ pennycausesdread
Thanks for reading! That is definitely a good point-some people aren't very good at communication unfortunately :( And I think Saya is just angry at Rhu and stressed about her move, so she's not being very cooperative :/ I'll see if I can incorporate something into future chapters tho :) Thanks!

I really wish that someone from Die's side would just try and get Rhu's side of the story. No one is trying to get her POV, royally frustrating. SAYA of all should be trying to get to hear her side, not judging.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thanks for reading! I'm glad I was able to shock you! haha I hope my future chapters won't disappoint! :)

I am in complete and total shock over this chapter. I was not expecting that at all. You're definitely good at surprises. Wow. I can't believe Rhu and Die are over. All I can say is wow because that is just...wow. Yeah, I'm definitely in shock.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, despite so many things going on in it! haha You're completely right about everything :p I hope you will enjoy future chapters! I'll try not to make them feel so rushed ;p haha

Woah what a chapter! How you managed to fit all that into one chapter and still manage to give it some form of flow is beyond me. But you did it. I kind of feel proud of Saya for standing up against Toshiya the way she did. And I bet her separation from Kyo is going to be very hard. Rhu definitely should of told Die that she wasn`t healthy enough to go on tour. Something tells me they are both going to regret leaving on such bad terms.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :) To be honest, I'm having such a difficult time writing updates without hating them x) hahaha I'm relieved to know they're not as crappy as I think they are x) I hope you enjoy the next chapter! ...once I get around to writing it x)

Ah, so much tension in one chapter! While I am surprised Rhu said no to Die I can also understand her reason behind it. I`d probably do the same thing. I`m so happy they are having a girl! Kyo asking Saya to stay with him was really sweet. And again I can understand why she declined. Though I think she pissed him off. But I think on some level he would of understood if she had told him the real reason she said no. I`m kind of excited to see how you have Toshiya and Saya interact. I bet it`ll either be a disaster or he`ll act like nothing ever happened. I can`t wait to read the next chapter.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thank you so much. I miss her with all my heart :( I am glad you enjoyed the chapter :) Your comments really help keep me motivated to continue writing, and give me perspectives I hadn't considered before! Thanks for always giving me feedback :)

I`m very sorry for your loss. It can be extremely hard to lose a beloved companion. Now as for this chapter, I wanted to say thank you for updating at such a hard time. I really liked how you tried to look at Rhu`s situation from more than just one point of view. I really hope neither her or the baby die. I can`t help but want to be optimistic when it comes to babies. And it was really sweet what Die did for her birthday. I really hope she says yes to marrying him! Saya`s decision to leave for the US definitely caught me off guard. And I`m even more surprised Rhu`s pregnancy problems didn`t change her mind at least a little bit. It would mine anyway. Either way, I`m really looking forward to the next chapter. I can`t wait to read it.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thank you for reading! I'm glad I managed to write something you weren't expecting! I'm still not sure how I plan to end this (it's like a rough sketch in my mind)-I may actually do an alternate ending option! I hope my future chapters don't disappoint!

Okay, I definitely was not expecting that. I did like this chapter though. I thought the look into Saya and Kyo's past was sweet. While Rhu and Die's situation is definitely bitter sweet. It makes me kinda anxious about the next chapter. I'm hoping you don't plan on killing Rhu or the baby. But I'm sure whatever you choose to write will still make for a great story.

@ Angel Von Ripper
Thanks for reading! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It wasn't one of my favorites :/ You gave me a great idea for a future chapter tho! Thank you! :D I can't wait to post the next chapter!