This chapter was just amazing. He's ready to give up and so is she, and then all of this happens just because she wants to feel something again. I hope that he complies and she can feel at least some of what she feels in her memories. It would be cool if she could actually remember him in some of the memories but I know that may not be likely. And no worries about the distracted thing... Me too. XD
I haven't been on this site for a while - cause life n stuff - but stumbling across your story has had me checking back every couple of hours for an update on this. I'm obviously a fan of Bucky, and now I'm a fan of the story you've placed him into. This has been a really great piece to read so far!
Awww poor Irving. But I want her with Bucky. And I'm really sorry someone tried to steal your story. I'm glad everything is sorted. I can't wait for more.
This was very informative. I think it will be interesting to see as she remembers piece by piece. I would love to read his reaction to her remembering how she called him Wonderboy. I'm curious to see if she's able to figure out why she's got such a deep feeling about wanting to kill them. Great chapter, and I can't wait for more. :)
Oh my gosh! So much happened in this chapter! I love this story honestly one of the best bucky barnes stories i've read in awhile on here. Poor girl :( I feel bad for her in this chapter, hopefully some good will happen in the present with her and Buck. Poor baby lost his arm D:
I really like how you described her killing and attacking, like the perfect soldier that hydra wants her to be. I can't wait to read the next update :D
Oh wow, to have intense pain every time you start to remember anything has to totally suck! And I assume she's going to get her brain scrambled like Bucky had to when he started to recognize Steve. I like these memories, and am curious about Bucky's three date thing and how Rose ended up being different between 1941 and 1945! And I know this is random and unrelated, but I really like the GIFs at the end of the chapters.
I absolutely loved the last two chapters. The flashbacks are very powerful and I love the way you're able to convey both of their feelings about everything without making it overbearing or repetitive. I enjoyed the mocking of Walter and also feel like you write Bucky's character very well. Can't wait for more!
Okay so I finally gotten the chance to read this :D It's hard finding a really good Bucky story but you've done a wonderful job with this story. It is very well written and you've done very well with the fighting scenes better than what i would do. Your descriptions and pinning down the personalities of the characters while still putting your little twist in with them is wonderful! I was really glad to finally catch up to read this :D Keep up the good work and cannot wait to see what is next!
I liked this chapter, I like how it shows of her strengths and how she is able to take on both Clint and Nat. I'm curious to see how Rose gets over being tortured for years.
Since seeing Civil War, I've been really into Bucky and I'm really excited to find stories with him in it. I really love where you're going with it, and how it's typed out. You write the characters really well, and I can't wait to read more. Nat's got a point, but if Bucky was able to be helped, so can Rose.
I'm stuck in the middle.. I see where the two of them are coming from.. Nat has actually seen the Fox in action and knows what she's capable of, while Steve only knows her as Rose, and what he's read in her files.. So yeah.. I'm stuck, not really on either side..
I always am hesitant to read fanfiction but I saw the comments on here and decided to try and my goodness I am glad I did!! You capture the characters perfectly, and every scene is vivid and descriptive without being over the top. Looking forward to see where this goes!!
poor little Steve!! (it was so funny though) hah, he totally just ignored that other girl when he met Rose can't wait to read more about how they actually became friends after that ::cute