Rattled Bones - Comments

  • CharmedLuna

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    I got so excited to see you updated. I do like the new face for Rose. I was/am a fan of Teen Wolf (only the first three seasons) so I'm glad it's someone I know can kick ass. haha. Ah! I love how you keep up with the vocabulary they used back then. It feels authentic. Great job!
    May 27th, 2016 at 08:33am
  • Lily Barnes

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    There are people who haven't seen Civil War? Anyway, I love this so far. You've done an excellent job with the characters; I would actually believe Steve's dialogue as being written by a Marvel screenwriter. And Bucky's angst and frustration is so real, it was actually hard for me to read when they first found Rose. You can really feel the character's emotions and get emotionally involved in what's going on. When Rose just kept repeating “James Buchanon Barnes,” in chapter two, I seriously almost lost it. I really hope things work out. Make them! Ha ha, just kidding. Seriously, great job so far! Keep up the good work.
    May 25th, 2016 at 03:15pm
  • helena_88

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    holy crap! that is one sick bastard for sure!! Shocked
    I wanna kick his ass.. poor rose Sad
    May 23rd, 2016 at 01:56pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    This is going to be one of my favorite stories!
    May 23rd, 2016 at 07:42am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    You have a really great style. The way you portrayed Steve is spot on, and I love your descriptions And I love the italics file notes. I only read the first chapter, but I do like this. I look forward to more,
    May 23rd, 2016 at 03:33am
  • Albluerose

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    I have to say that I that I really like this story, I love the way you wrote out Bucky and how he needed her to remember. It was like I could visualize him trying to get her to remember who he was and what it was that they had, snap her out of what they were doing to her. Love it keep it going. :)
    May 23rd, 2016 at 02:04am
  • helena_88

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    aawe she's worse off than Bucky.. Poor thing! And Bucky Sad they've done a number on her for sure..
    May 20th, 2016 at 06:32pm
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    Im crying already
    May 20th, 2016 at 05:20pm
  • zima.

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    Ack!! A Bucky story! I'm already loving where this is going, and I can't wait to read more!! tehe
    May 20th, 2016 at 03:37am
  • helena_88

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    I'm really likin' the start and can't wait for more XD I for one like when there's ''past'' chapters in stories that involves Steve and Bucky Cute
    May 19th, 2016 at 08:43am