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  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    This story is AMAZING
    June 26th, 2010 at 03:54pm
  • Kricket

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    like this chapter... but goes by pretty fast.... and dont u think its kinda wierd that she would just let him sleep with her when they barely kno each other??
    June 12th, 2010 at 10:03am
  • Kricket

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    ive only read the first chapter so far but i really like the idea of your story... theres only 3 things i want to say which r: u might want to change the word color bcuz its kinda hard to notice the words...uhh some things need to be separated into its own paragraph so it doesnt all run together... also i would give more details on the people and places that r there during the week that went by... other than that i think its good and i cant wait to read more!! =]
    June 12th, 2010 at 08:34am
  • celestial_royalty

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    Niiiiiice. See I totally knew that guy was a veg! I mean, what kind of a gold-eyed vampire goes around kidnapping humans? I knew it was fishy! Fishy, hehee. I can't imagine a dog/wolf eating fish. Isn't that for cats? Ah well. She has two brothers named Seth now right? Hahaha. That's nice. She and Seth should have a water balloon fight if it ever comes down to a sequel. Or maybe just a pillow fight. I'll have to put that in one of my stories. ;] Check them out! <3
    February 18th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • teamjheddd

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    OMFG! this is the best story EVER!!!! i mean, yes the ending was a little cheesy, but, hey, i liked it.☺
    November 25th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • debzxxx

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    This is really gooooood :D
    update sooon ;)
    November 22nd, 2009 at 07:25am
  • Annelliii

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    oh wow beeeeeeautiful story! I spent like 5 hours reading it aha but you know....nathalie is gonna age while jake stays the same so you shouldnt do a 20 years later epilogue lol. But if you added a twist like...the person a werewolf imprints on stops aging too, then there's a difference (or if Jacob starts aging).
    October 4th, 2009 at 06:33am
  • MangAddict

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    OMIGOD!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEEEEEEEE YOUR STORY!!!! I"M SO SAD IT"S OVER!!!!
    August 25th, 2009 at 04:12pm
  • em.anderson2009

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    I loved the ending!!But im gonna miss this story soo much!! Cry
    LOVE JACOB AND SETH!!!!!!!!!!! :arms: :hug:
    August 2nd, 2009 at 12:36pm
  • After.The.Rain

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    It was a really well written story and i loved it. I would love you even more if you did a squel but thats just me. *Wink, wink, nugde, nugde*
    August 1st, 2009 at 09:24pm
  • Snaps_

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    yay! i loved it! an epilogue(sp?) would be nice though. it was an OK ending but really open ended...and the song thing wasnt cheesy at all. it was perfectly put in. YAY! *claps* god job!
    August 1st, 2009 at 07:37pm
  • RandaRue22

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    Love it love it love it!!!
    August 1st, 2009 at 05:15am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    i thought it was lovely. cc:
    August 1st, 2009 at 03:48am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    August 1st, 2009 at 02:04am
  • TokioHotelMiami

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    *Dodge's Tomato's* Thank you for updating! And I Think The Ending's Fine :D
    August 1st, 2009 at 12:38am
  • LoveMySmexyJacobWolf

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    OMFG!! this story is sooooo good i mean it has JACOB in it!! plz update soon!
    July 28th, 2009 at 06:31pm
  • Snaps_

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    Yay!!! its back!!!
    im so glad :)
    i love this story :)
    ZOMG!
    jake is being a meeny butt!!!
    for good reasons....
    but still!!!
    July 26th, 2009 at 03:44am
  • talking-bird.

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    i can't wait to see what happens next!
    jacob better forgive her for that little stunt...
    July 3rd, 2009 at 02:06am
  • em.anderson2009

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    I love it!
    sad :(
    wnt her to stay with jacob :(
    post again ASAP
    July 2nd, 2009 at 03:25pm
  • RandaRue22

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    OMG! thank u so much for updating, i have been waiting so long for u 2. I love this chapter, along with all the others of course, please update again soon,.
    July 2nd, 2009 at 08:34am
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