This was really good! I don't think I've ever read a band fic before and if yours is anything to go by, I should definitely change that.
I like how you didn't really describe the narrator because it lets the reader put themselves in the the narrators shoes. I also think you've really got a talent for making the reader feel scared right along with the narrator during the chase and I cared about what would happen to her, even though it was fairly short. Like I said, great job! I'd like to see what you write in the future.
I like how you didn't really describe the narrator because it lets the reader put themselves in the the narrators shoes. I also think you've really got a talent for making the reader feel scared right along with the narrator during the chase and I cared about what would happen to her, even though it was fairly short. Like I said, great job! I'd like to see what you write in the future.