Fuck this is so good! It's so hard to find a well written story on here, particularly one about John, but I love this, very original and not predictable at all. Please do more!!
This is so good?! I'm so glad I found this story!! Also, I'm upset Poppy still has Adrian on her mind when John seems to perfectly make her happy. (Lowkey whisper: PLEASE UPDATE)
ugh just go with John! He's the good guy! I love this story though, really enjoying how organic John and Poppy's relationship is, fun and casual...maybe too casual if she's hooking up with her ex-husband though...
ugh just go with John! He's the good guy! I love this story though, really enjoying how organic John and Poppy's relationship is, fun and casual...maybe too casual if she's hooking up with her ex-husband though...
ugh just go with John! He's the good guy! I love this story though, really enjoying how organic John and Poppy's relationship is, fun and casual...maybe too casual if she's hooking up with her ex-husband though...
@ daydreamz I should have an update coming within the next week, so we can see where things are going to go from here with Poppy. Hopefully it'll all be alright ;) I appreciate your kinds words, and I hope you're well!
@ MidgetStarr I'm sorry!!!! It had to happen, but I'm so happy that you've had such a passionate response to these characters I've created. I honestly appreciate your kind words about this story so much! I hope you're well!
Poppy, noooo!!! I really hoped that she would have had the strength to not get pulled back into Adrian. Super curious to see how things are gonna play out now!
*rant starts here*Oh God, can Poppy be... any more... retarded? Like, woman, what the hell are you thinking??!! Just, ugh, I want to slap her for that decision. What about John, Poppy?! He's gonna be pissed and heart-broken and he's not gonna trust you, I shit you not... Gosh, she should've just told John that she was married and that Adrian was back in her life and UGH, SHE SHOULD HAVE ASKED JOHN QUESTIONS TO STOP OVER-THINKING EVERY LITTLE THING... *rant probably ends here* But... I can relate to Poppy. It's almost impossible to be confident and talk it out with the other person (that one person that you like oh so very much) so you understand what's going on and what they're thinking or what they mean when they say one thing or another. Though, talking is important and she should've told John that she had been married, or she could've told him that in the most subtle way where he'd understand that he shouldn't ask questions and she'd tell him once she was confident enough... As I mentioned before, I can relate to her, tho at the same time I want to slap her for some things she said and did (for example, this last thing with Adrian...). But, we all do stupid things and in real life they don't really turn out good and we rarely get a happy ending. However, I wish Poppy will get her happy ending and Adrian will get the fuck out of her life. c: Anywho, I like your story. It's well-written and well-paced and the characters are developing at a nice pace. Keep up the good work! And pardon my "French"(english is not my first language 8D) in this comment :D
So I just got all caught up and, Poppy's thoughts kind of break my heart, because I understand them. Your writing is amazing ( I know I said that already, I just can't think of another way to tell you how much I like it). Also, I totally care/can relate. I broke up with my boyfriend this year too, not so long ago, and I stopped writing for a long while too (if you ever need to rant/talk I'm free). Another note, I too saw the Maine on Monday in Toronto! It was great, wasn't it? But super sweaty. You know its hot when people from Arizona can't take the heat. Aahah. Anyways, this is fantastic.
Okay, I'm only on chapter three but oh my god. I adore your writing and I'm sorry I didn't read this earlier but also poor lil John. The way you've written this is very realistic and I don't know what else to say - it's just amazing.
Okay, I'm only on chapter three but oh my god. I adore your writing and I'm sorry I didn't read this earlier but also poor lil John. The way you've written this is very realistic and I don't know what else to say - it's just amazing.