Fate. - Comments

I don't usually read Avengers fiction but this one is interesting. I'm not a huge fan of the layout, but I think the header image is pretty great. I think you could have added more length and imagery to your chapters. I also agree that maybe you should look into a beta for your story. You can find a thread for that in the forums. Thanks so much for entering my contest! It was a pleasure to read.

Loved the update.

Loved the update.

@ Divergent
I would love some help if you don't mine, I write from my phone so I don't always catch it. Thank you for letting me know, I tend to do that at times and idk why lol. I will update asap. :)

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This is really good, and I hardly ever read Avengers stuff! I've never been into Thor, but this was just too good to pass up. As you asked, you do go from third to first in chapter three. Also, I think a beta editor would do really good for this because there are a lot of errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation. Your plot and writing are really strong, but the mistakes sort of take away from the story. I'm actually an editor for a few Indie authors and an online publication if you'd like some help~ I can't wait for the next update so hopefully you'll lift that hold soon!! I think Thor is just the cutest ever in chapter four, so I need to know what happens next!

Wait he's with Jane in this? Well this is going to get more intersting.

I've been looking for something like this i like it i hope you keep going I'll definitely be waiting for more

This is amazingggg. Keep going please.

I usually don't read much avengers fan fiction but this caught my eye.