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@ OneDirection101
OMG you are actually the best!! Like wow your comments are perfect nd thank you sooo much! It's ok that you can't commnt all the time! We will finish this fic just for YOU but we are starting another one(: Haha your obsession with Louis is rad and basically perfect. Literlly my life with Harold!!!! So glad you live this fic!!!!!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA I WAS RIGHT FUCK YOU LIAM FUCK YOU ZAYN



EVERYONE IS HORRIFICALLY TWISTED ALL I TRUST IS MY LIL BABY PRECIOUS CUPCAKE LOUIS NO BYE I'M GONNA HANG ONTO HIM EVEN IN JAIL ZAYN IS TWENTY-FUCKING-TWO AND LIAM GROWN TOO AND PIA KNEW IT AND EVERYONE IS NASTY EVERY. ONE. IS. NASTY. GODDDD I'M SCARED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NOW POOR EVERLY WELL NOW SHE AIN'T CHOOSIN' LIAM BECAUSE LIAM WILD AND ZAYN WILD AND PIA WILD AND LOUIS NEEDS TO ESCAPE AND WTF IS UP WITH HARRY LET'S TALK TO HIM LET'S SEE WHAT HE HAS TO SAY ABOUT THIS

YOU GONNA BE SUPERMAN HARRY

EVEN IF YOU CAN'T BE NO SUPERMAN FOR HER PLS BE SUPERHUMAN

OR OMSETHING

THIS STORY IM BURNGUAEHTIUESTGUI I'M ON FIRE EVERYTHING I KNEW WAS A LIE I KNEW LIAM WAS NOT TO BE TRUSTED BUT HOT DAMN AND I KNEW ZAYN AND PIA WERE BOLD FRIENDS BUT H O T D A M N AND THEN LOUIS MY SWEET LIL PRECIOUS LIL TINY LIL BEAN WAAAAAAAH HE'S STUCK FOR NOTHING AND NOW IT'S UP TO HARRY TO HELP ME UNDERSTAND I'M. ON. FIRE.

everly thought she was in the dark baby girl i'm right there with you



me throughout this whole story literally

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i'm so passionate about louis it's almost horrible TRICKS OH GOD WILL I BE ABLE TO HANDLE THE TRICKS???

YOU SURE FREAKIN DID HAVE A SURPRISE WITH LIAM GOOD LORDY MY HEART

the fandom was slowly coming back together and then drag me down and my body shattered and then louis "confirmed" the baby drama but i sAT MY ASS ON THAT COUCH AND WATCHED GMA AND THAT. WAS. NOT. A. CONFIRMATION. he didn't give any specifics, he wasn't happy at all (for a guy who said at like 20 that he'd love to have kids and get married, "even as young as you are?", you'd think he'd be a little happier???) and even the rest of the boys had faces like they were gonna laugh sO I DON'T BELIEVE ANYTHING UNTIL A BABY WITH TOMLINSON DNA FALLS OUTTA HER BYEEEEE.

HAHAHAHAHA THEY THOUGHT THEY WERE GONNA HURT HARRY AND HARRY SHOWED THEM BY BEING EVEN MORE BEAUTIFUL NAAAAHAHAHAHAHA

i'm sorry i've been such a horrid commenter! internet connection troubles have only allotted me to be online for about 10-15 minutes whenever i can get on, and i don't feel like that's enough time to give you a proper comment, and i wanna make sure i fully communicate how much i adore this story if you delete this fic i think i may sob. i do understand the desire for feedback, though, and i don't want you guys to have to carry on with something you're not feeling. i do absolutely adore this fic, though, once again, and i would also absolutely adore it if you kept it up!

I'M IN SO DEEP WITH THIS FIC I CAN'T LEAVE NOW.

oh! i don't have twitter - i'd totally follow you if i did! - but i do have a tumblr! i'd be happy to follow you there if you have one? c:

@ homer j.
Hey!':

Wow you are so passionate about Louis its spectacular lol. I don't wnt to say too much cuz we've got tricks up our sleeves(; (;

Oh man youre in a huge surprise with Liam!!!(; (;

Zayn and Pia have hug chapter coming upso be prepared.

OMG that cracked me up!! Harry is perfection(':

Wow I'm beyond happy that you like that chapter! We will certainly add more of those. (':

Aww thnk you soo much!

Omg preach. This fandom is a goddmned mess. Louis can not be a father like no way. AND HARRY!! DON'T GET ME STARTED HE I MY PRECIOUS FUCKER AND WHOEVER WNTS TO KILL HAS TO GO THROUGH ME CUZ HE IS MY BABY

OMG THE ZAUGHTY BREAK UP MAD MY LIFE YESSSS OMG I WAS SO HAPPY

Oh niall, just stay innocent

Thnk you so much. You are our biggest supporter we love you so much!!

((hi beebs! it's me, tommo; but i'm homer for spirit week ))

ONE: LOUIS I LOVE YOU WAGTYUWSGYBHEUS HGEU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE DRUGS???? MURDERS????? THERE HAS TO BE MORE TO THIS LIKE THIS CAN'T BE IT HE HAS TO BE DOING THIS FOR A CERTAIN REASON LIKE IS HE DOING IT FOR MONEY??? TO SUPPORT HIS FAMILY BECAUSE HE KNOWS HIS DAD IS A PIECE OF SHIT????? LOUIS PLS DON'T DO THIS TO ME. I MEAN EVERLY.

NO I MEAN ME.

two. i don't trust liam. at all. he knows way too much about louis' alleged position and what happened to niall and what goes in this organization. liam is probably in this as well. research my ass. you can't find this through generic research. liam probably a) set louis up because he knows louis dislikes the idea of liam and everly together or b) is on his way to try and get in on the plan to get louis out and back in some bullshit or c) off to take louis' place. i don't trust him. he knows too much. GET OUT GOODBYE ADIOS ARRIVEDERCI PAYNO.

three. well what the HELL did zayn and pia expect her to do???? that is her brother, and i think they were being extremely nasty to her. her brother had just gotten arrested and now all of this terrifying and dangerous information has come out that may or may not be true about him. louis' life and her life may very well be in danger. instead of them at least taking it a little easy with her until it blows over, they got nasty and rude. they clearly don't know what it's like to learn some almost mind-numbing news about someone so close to you, good or bad. (i'm making this too personal. ) and the liam/harry/everly situation has nothing to do with louis' arrest so they should get off their goddamn high horse. i don't think they were right. they were really awful to her and i hope they see that before they come around again. maybe they were offended when she told them to leave, but they could've talked her down instead of evolving into shitheads. zayn.

I SOUND LIKE I'M TALKING RIGHT TO THEM I NEED TO SHUT UP

four. O HAI HARRY I FEEL LIKE I SHOULD BE LISTENING TO NO CONTROL RIGHT NOW CUZ THAT'S CLEARLY WHAT Y'A LL GOT.

POWERLESS & I DON'T CARE IT'S OBVIOUS I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF YA THE PEDAL'S DOWN MY EYES ARE CLOSED NO CONTROOOOOL

five. the chapter told from "his" point of view (i am 99.9% sure it's harry because i feel like harry is very self-deprecating while liam probably holds himself in a much higher regard, feeling he's better for everly than harry or even her own brother, given that he tries to almost fit a superhero role when he's around her) just might be my absolute favorite chapter. it's really interesting and different and almost poetic and i adore the flow of it and i wouldn't mind a few more chapters like this in the future.

ahhhhh i love this story so much, you guys are doing amazing! keep up the great work!

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this fandom shit is so tiresome like literally nothing has been chill since the elounor breakup in march. the soundtrack to 1D in 2015 is literally whatmakesyouhaha.mp3 but the stuff going on right now is so serious it's almost scary. and the way harry's being treated is sickening. the death threats, like, i cannot believe we're going through this again. the august 5th show is going to have security up the ass because some jerk decides to say they're going to kill harry at the metlife stadium???? why would you do that? and they said that we're not gonna be able to save him.

honey. you underestimate the 1D fandom.

and the way the fan treated him taking a selfie with him like BITCH NO DO YOU REALLY WANT TO SHIT ON THE YVES-SAINT LAURENT WEARING CUPCAKE OF SUNSHINE THAT IS HARRY STYLES NO YOU DON'T.

and the louis baby drama. i'm. nope. louis is my precious lil baby and he can't raise a child being a child. but honestly, while i think louis would be a really good father, i don't think he and this briana girl are having a baby. the timeline is all screwed up, the stories are mismatched,the world is making it into one big joke, the news keeps managing to make it about larry stylinson somehow (which i do not mind ), no one has confirmed/denied it, and you don't announce pregnancies before you even hit the first trimester. like. what the hell. what kind of mess is this pregnancy scandal. and has everyone forgotten the haylor baby scandal in 2012/2013??? JOKE. my take on it is louis' not about to be a daddy with a girl he accidentally knocked up. the stories are a mess and nah. either way, louis is still my precious lil hedgehog of sunshine and fluff, though, so, hey.

BUT THE ZAUGHTY BREAKUP THO. THAT WAS THE BEST THING TO WAKE UP TO. I WAS CRYINGGGGGG. ZAYN OH MY GOD HE HAS NO CHILL. HE IS THE SAHARA. HE IS ON FIRE.

niall probably stress laughs himself to sleep every night of his life god bless one direction

((i'm so sorry this comment got so long holy crap!!! you guys are doing great with this story, sorry again! ))

@ ImASymphonySoldier
Thank you thank you thank you(:

@ tommo;
Hahaha wowow I appreciate that so so so much!!!
Aww I love that picture of Harry lmao(':
Omg I'm soo glad you enjoy this story!!!!!!!
And the shady part with Louis will b in th next chapter(: (;
It's gonna get more intense(;
Thank you(': The concert was amazing and perfect and Spaces will never be the same.

HOLDING ME CLOSER TILL OUR EYE MEET(': (':

xoxox

when a fic got you feeling some kinda punk!harry way

HARRY YOU ARE SUCH A NASTY LIL DEMANDING LIL CURLY HEADED LIP RING WEARING GREEN EYE OWNING HOT AF PIECE OF SHIT MAN. I LOVE IT.

oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh they're getting so hot and heavy and hot on the curb near people oh my gosh this is intense this is insanity what if LIAM comes down the corner my soul is curling

oh mGYDo he took her to the car they're going to his place guys i'm dying

ME THE MOMENT HER PHONE RANG:


oh nooooooo who's calling her with her luck i bet it's liam or louis ( NO GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF WOMAN) and liam's gonna be asking where she is or louis' gonna be asking where she is and it's gonna be so BAD for her because she's supposed to be with liam and louis doesn't want her around either and oh my gooooooood i'm melting i love this so much.

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you are sososo welcome! i really do just adore this story, it's really good!

OH MY GOD I GET TO FIND OUT SOON MY HEART i have a feeling it's gonna kill me though oh man

i'm glad you had such a good time! the concert just looked so good, ugh, they went hard and it looked amazing. "spaces" had me a wreck and i was watching through youtube i can barely listen to that song on my phone!!

side not: I LOVE PHOTOGRAPH THAT SONG IS MY LIFEBLOOD. SO YOU CAN ~KEEP~ ME INSIDE THE POCKET OF YOUR ~RIPPED~ JEANS AAAAH

Love love love love this !

@ tommo;
First off, thank you so so so much or your input!!!!! It mens so much to you enjoy our story!
Ok, haha I love the idea of harry and lip ring(': (': (':
I like what you think bout Everly and Liam(; (; (;
Haha you will definitely find out whats so shady about these boys in the next few chapters,starting with Louis!!(: (:
Omg!!! The concet twas beyond beautiful and Harrys fall made me love him more(':Niall totally rocked out and I loved it!!! Omg i was so unprepared for Spaces I was awreck!!!
Thank you for your comment!! We appreciate it so much!

so random note harry with a lip ring i am deceased

back on topic, i still really love this story! sorry i didn't comment on the past two updates, i haven't been able to properly comment on anything lately OKAY NOW EVERLY YOU GOT LIAM AND AS SOON AS HARRY COME CRAWLING THROUGH YOUR WINDOW YOUR HEART MELTS AND YOU BE LIKE "NAW I SHOULDN'T'VE KISSED HIM AHAHA" baby girl pls i'm dying here.

also, backtracking, i love louis to absolute pieces and i'm suuuuch a louis girl bUT JESUS CHRIST IF THIS BOY DOESN'T STOP ACTING SO SHADY I AM SMACKING HIM. I AM. I SWEAR.

i really do still adore this story, though, and i can't wait to figure out what the hell these boys are doing keep up the good work, guys!

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i have a friend who went to the concert last night, but i didn't, since i'm in michigan i'm hoping to go to the august show up here, though! i watched a lot of the concert through vines: mainly harry's colossal fall and niall going hard af to "act my age" and spaces.......i wasn't ready.......i am eternally zemo for zayn.......please.......

i hope you had a lot of fun!! it looked great!

@ tommo;
Awww thank you soo much. That absolutely made my day!!!! I'm so o glad you're enjoying it!! You'll definitely figure out whats bad with Harry and liam and louis soon. Thank you so much!!! I'm gad you like the double writers too! Chapter 18 will be up soon!!

this story is absolutely wild (in a good way, the best of ways!) it's got me hanging on my seat for more and i just wanna figure out what's so bad about harry and liam and what the absolute hell louis is doing (no matter what kind of trash he's up in i can never be angry at him, jesus, the life of being a louis tomlinson kiss-ass ) and eVERLY DON'T GO BACK AND FORTH NOOO MORE. YOU GOT LIAM. NOW STICK WITH LIAM. BE SATISFIED WITH THE PRECIOUS LIMA BEAN.

and i feel like that's gong downhill soon, too.

i really like this story so far, i can't wait to see where you guys (it's two authors now, yes?) take it!!