July 6th, 2015 at 07:24am
Welp. That last line hit me hard.
Really though, I like how easily the emotion in your drabbles just flows through the words. It's like someone is standing there casually talking, but what they're saying is so crazy and intense. I don't know if that makes any sense but it's the best way I can describe it.
I also like the angle you took with the word forgiveness. You could have written about anything, really, but I like where you went with it
Forgiveness was taken into a different light with the heavy emotion and how it was well written. The character was willing to take that step not only for his/her sake but also for the mother just to end the suffering.