How Life Works - Comments

@ guysinmyhead
Sure! I had a suspicion that it wasn't finished. Either way, I'm here to help a fellow writer!

@ poison and blood
thank you for posting because I didn't actually mean to post chapter 3 I meant to save it as a draft xD it's literally 100% incomplete. If you hadn't commented, I wouldn't have realized it. I'm taking it down now.

@ poison and blood
thank you for posting because I didn't actually mean to post chapter 3 I meant to save it as a draft xD it's literally 100% incomplete. If you hadn't commented, I wouldn't have realized it. I'm taking it down now.

Heads up, the story is a little too confusing. Stick with a timeline and build characters, story and relationships...avoid time jumps. Why has she taken a liking to Mike? How has her relationship with Kim progressed? Why is she closer with the boys? These are all questions that need answers, and getting antsy (you're not the only one, believe me!) to get to the good stuff is what kills a story. You had a promising start, but I think you probably got a bit excited and impatient. Take a moment and really consider the story you are trying to tell!

Aw, this is gonna be cute and ugly, I can feel it. That's the best kind of story. Keep updating!