Tangled up in You. - Comments

Please update soon!!!

You leave us for 4 months and just leave a '<3' as the author's note? Pssshh... psh! XD
Great job with the update, though. Ooohh.. kind of liking this Mike character, intrigued to see if Alex gets jealous. XD Karma coming to him, for sure. And I'm a bit offended for Scharlotte that he was surprised she gave her number away. Scharlotte can do what she very well pleases. *huff* XD
lol, if only Ellie knew what had happened... surprised me that he hung out with her still though, with the way the last chapter ended where he seemed a bit hung up on Scharlotte. Hmm...
But regardless, entertaining update for sure. Loved it and can't wait for more! :D Hoping you maybe update again soon... idk how you've been lately, though, writing wise. We need to catch up! :(

An update, yay! Oooh... so I can see their relationship possibly turning into a friends with benefits sort of thing. Hmmm... and I wonder what it is that Alex is hiding from her? Will it come up again later? Hmm...
lol, I love how the band was now randomly brought in. That was a random transition but I hope we see more about them now. :)
One thing I noted:

“Not as cute as you.” I smirked down at her.

“Psht. You are so.” He huffed as she sat up a little. “What time is it?”

Since this is Alex's POV, the 'He huffed' should be 'She huffed' since it's talking about Scharlotte, correct? lol. Or maybe change "He" to "I", but it shouldn't be 'He', I know that much, lol.
Another thing I wanted to mention, that may have just been something you wanted to change with the story, idk... but the name Alf for Zack's dad, just a random thing you chose or did you choose to differ it from real life? His dad's name in real life is Mark, so I was just wondering if you maybe just wanted to change it for the story or maybe didn't know. Because to be quite honest, I find it sad that I know that, lol. XD But was just wondering about that. Either way is fine, but it was just a curiosity and possible correction maybe? Idk.
But yeah, great job with the update though, overall. Can't wait for more! :D

Aw, cute update. *blushing face emoji*
I needed to read something cute because I'm currently reading a more emotional story right now and it's just... making me emotional, lol.
But great job with the update! I really enjoyed it. :) Bummed that they're staying in the friendzone... mehhh... but I have a feeling it will turn into something more. I mean, c'mon, they can't deny that kiss/make-out! lol. Seemed intense and passion-filled. Romantic! XD
lol. Anyway, I'm still feeling emotional due to the other story I'm reading but really great job and can't wait for more! :D

Loving this!

Yay, an update! Great job with the chapter! :D
lol. Scharlotte going to kiss him and then missing and then the stumble just made me laugh, because, while it was kind of a funny moment, that would definitely be me if I ever tried kissing someone. XD LMAO. Just awkward and clumsy. Sounds about right.
And aww... I think Alex likes her too but just thinks she's too good for him, like was already said, so he hasn't tried anything. I don't think she should be discouraged. And after that kiss, I especially think that. ☺️ lol.
Wonder what's going to happen now... *thinking face emoji* It won't let me copy and paste that one for some reason. :(
But anyway, really enjoyed the update! Can't wait for more! :D

I am so excited that you posted another part! Cannot wait to see more of it, hopefully soon.

I just recommended the story! May be jumping the gun a little bit but I think it's enough in to do so. I like where it's going.
Hmm... I don't really have much to say other than that. lol. I loved the update! Great job with it! I found it interesting that they're just hanging out now, idk... I'm not sure what I was expecting exactly, I guess it's not too odd but I find it interesting.
Can't wait to see where this goes. :)

Woo! Another story updated! :D
I almost forgot about this story; when I got the email I kind of blanked on which story it was (probably due to the fact that I've been reading so many lately and I haven't read this one for a while), but anyway, when I saw that it was this one I got excited. :DD I'm glad you're continuing with it. :)
Hmm... even though Alex claims he just wants to be friends and isn't just talking to her because of the whole virgin thing, I'm still a bit skeptical. I mean, he may like her, but like just proclaiming it after that secret of hers was let out? Hmm...
Idk. Just has me wondering... we'll see what happens I guess. Maybe I'm reading too much into it. And this is a bit odd for me considering I'm usually the optimist in these types of situations. lol.
I noticed a few grammar things, but I'm not sure if you want me to point them out or not? Just a few things you would probably catch if you did another read-through. Idk, I feel like I'm annoying when I point those things out. XD But if it helps you, let me know and I'll do that from now on. :) Or let me know if it's annoying. XD
Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D

OMG why didn't you tell me you had a new story?! :OO :DDDDD
This is seriously sounding so good already and you only have two chapters.
I can't wait to see what you have in store for this! And I'm wondering how the layout picture relates... hmm... or maybe it was just a design choice, but usually your pictures relate in some way, aha.
I would have checked it out sooner but I just went to your profile and saw it.
Definitely subscribed! Can't wait for more! :D