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  • dubstepgoat

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    wish this story hadn't been abandoned :(
    September 7th, 2016 at 10:47pm
  • Lovinmusic

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    @ xXBvbloverXx
    Thanks! Glad to see you worked your way through a couple of my stories XD I'm working on all of them, trying to make up for my slow updating with some really meaty chapters but that's making it take longer - eek! :D
    October 6th, 2015 at 10:26pm
  • xXBvbloverXx

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    cant wait for the next chapter!
    September 28th, 2015 at 04:45am
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    @ DevourTheWatermelon
    Aww thank you!!! I'm working on the next chapter now :D
    July 8th, 2015 at 11:11am
  • nolongeractive

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    I liv this story. I r ally like the detail and being able to feel what they feel. Can't wait to read more!
    July 7th, 2015 at 06:01am
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    June 18th, 2015 at 10:26pm
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    @ tommo;
    OH MY GOSH YOU ARE THE BEST COMMENTER I'VE EVER HAD ON ANY STORY. EVER. XD

    literally that made my...whole week! No, month, no! Year! Hahhaa, thank you so much I can't tell you how great it is to hear what you think about everything ^_^ I hope you'll keep reading and I really appreciate such detailed feedback on all the characters and situations. That is the best motivation ever to keep writing ^_^

    I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :D keep reading!
    June 18th, 2015 at 10:23pm
  • saegusa.

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAH MY GOODNESS I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY.

    I love the detail and the action and the relationships and I really like Lionel like I am very much appreciating his presence and he keeps some sanity within Austin and between him and Andy, Austin seems to have a pretty chill group surrounding him.

    THE NOOSE OH SWEET LORD THAT SCARED ME SO BAD I THOUGHT HE WAS GONE. Don I was so terrified, and the way the chapter just ended like that, I have never clicked the next chapter link so fast, oh my Lord.

    AND THEY WERE DOING SO GOOD AND THEN THE LAWYER.

    I really don't appreciate the way Austin reacted, bruh. Coffee I get what he meant and the way he's thinking and all but Andy is quite literally trying to save your ass and you're so worried about not owing anyone and trying to do your own when the boy point-blank told you you wouldn't have to do a thing / pay them back. Stop being a little bitch and accept the help you're being offered??? Because Andy is trying??? To help you??? Grr And I understand him to a degree but I still wanna just slap him around a little, y'know? tehe

    I really, really like this story, and I can't wait to see what you've got in store for those two!! Cute

    [i'll pay you like ten bucks to kill metal] I KID.
    June 18th, 2015 at 10:11pm
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