@ Hells Bells Ahhh! Thank you so much for your super-kind comment. I'm so glad you picked up on those things, haha. I'm not entirely sure where I want this story to go yet but I'm kind of in love with it right now and your comment is so encouraging!
I honestly fucking love this already. I can't wait to see Eliza embarrass the shit out of Kaner on plenty more occasions in the future and Jonny learning to have more of a sense of humor about it, just smug grinning in the background. This is going to be fun ;)
Ahhh! Thank you so much for your super-kind comment. I'm so glad you picked up on those things, haha. I'm not entirely sure where I want this story to go yet but I'm kind of in love with it right now and your comment is so encouraging!