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  • AngelicWasteland;

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    You've always been one of my favourite authors on here and this is just another example of why... this is a great start to a story that has a lot of potential. Good job!
    September 25th, 2015 at 03:13am
  • TombRaider

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    You have the basics of a good story starting up and I really like it so far. I wonder how these two characters (Luce and Dave) will develop and what the outcome of them being a family will be.
    September 4th, 2015 at 05:31pm
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    Subscribed. <3
    September 4th, 2015 at 05:28pm
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