Great chapter! Jack kind of makes me hurt for him, yknow? And Jack should know that some of the best songs in the industry came out a mental hospital or rehab. I feel Jack is going to have a hard time and I really relate to him. Can't wait for more.
Oh my Barakat! This is going to be intense. I love your idea and it is very enticing. Your intro is very eye-catching and I couldn't help but hang onto every word. I can't wait for more. -E