I like! Was really cute and sweet!
July 12th, 2015 at 06:24am
HEY THAT'S MY OTP
I like the story, I really do. I like where you're going with it. I saw very few errors and really enjoy the plot. I'm not a fan of the layout, it's a little hard to read. I also feel like this story could use a little more imagery and description. However, I really am invested in these characters. I'm also going to recommend getting a beta/editor, so that if there are any grammatical/spelling errors you miss, someone can catch them before you post. Thank you so much for entering my contest, it was a pleasure to read this :)