California Dreams - Comments

@ mrsmshadz
oops I fixed it! Like I said I was half asleep when I typed it out ;)

They slept in a bed of bugs???

That was amazing! But it can't end! It's only 10 chapters or so?!

I loved this chapter. It was funny, sexy and romantic. I hope you decide to continue! Please update again soon! Xxx

@ HailtotheQueen
i think most people would think that he's comin off rude and disrespectful, but i just didn't see that. i thought he was hilarious

@ wilda73
I was hoping people would get the humor of drunk Matt! lol

lols i loved it! a drunk Matt is funny! lookin forward to the next update!

Loved this, please update again soon xxx

"Pound Town!" Hahaha

Haha thanks!

@ mrsmshadz
Lol sure ill try to get more discriptive next time!

Oh and I love the In this moment version of Closer better than NIN lol

Hahaha cool! Nice update! Can you put a lil more detail into the sex scenes, please!! Lol

@ mrsmshadz
some of the things that I write are based on personal experiences (I've never been raped or anything like that!) I just used my boyfriend's weight as a reference and then added like 40 pounds to that lol

I like this story! How did you figure out how much the guy weighed, the one who tried to rape her?

I'm totally loving this story and I hope you'll be updating again very soon xxx

Omg! Love this story. Aw matt's so sweet :) so happy there engaged..can't wait to read more

Go Jayde go!!! I'm still lovin it!!

@ wilda73
I'm glad youre diggin it!

Yup! As good as the first one!!! Can't wait for more!