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  • HailtotheQueen

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    @ mrsmshadz
    oops I fixed it! Like I said I was half asleep when I typed it out ;)
    July 28th, 2015 at 04:58pm
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    They slept in a bed of bugs??? Shocked
    July 28th, 2015 at 09:11am
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    That was amazing! But it can't end! It's only 10 chapters or so?!
    July 23rd, 2015 at 01:37am
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    I loved this chapter. It was funny, sexy and romantic. I hope you decide to continue! Please update again soon! Xxx
    July 22nd, 2015 at 09:48am
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    @ HailtotheQueen
    i think most people would think that he's comin off rude and disrespectful, but i just didn't see that. i thought he was hilarious Mr. Green
    July 15th, 2015 at 06:22pm
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    @ wilda73
    I was hoping people would get the humor of drunk Matt! lol
    July 15th, 2015 at 06:45am
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    lols i loved it! a drunk Matt is funny! lookin forward to the next update! Mr. Green
    July 14th, 2015 at 12:32pm
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    Loved this, please update again soon xxx
    July 14th, 2015 at 10:37am
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    "Pound Town!" Hahaha lmfao
    July 14th, 2015 at 10:37am
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    Haha thanks!
    July 14th, 2015 at 06:09am
  • HailtotheQueen

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    @ mrsmshadz
    Lol sure ill try to get more discriptive next time!
    July 13th, 2015 at 09:13pm
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    Oh and I love the In this moment version of Closer better than NIN lol
    July 13th, 2015 at 08:59pm
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    Hahaha cool! Nice update! Can you put a lil more detail into the sex scenes, please!! Lol
    July 13th, 2015 at 08:54pm
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    @ mrsmshadz
    some of the things that I write are based on personal experiences (I've never been raped or anything like that!) I just used my boyfriend's weight as a reference and then added like 40 pounds to that lol
    July 13th, 2015 at 05:36am
  • mrsmshadz

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    I like this story! How did you figure out how much the guy weighed, the one who tried to rape her?
    July 12th, 2015 at 10:11am
  • AJ9

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    I'm totally loving this story and I hope you'll be updating again very soon xxx
    July 11th, 2015 at 02:20pm
  • MrsChristX

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    Omg! Love this story. Aw matt's so sweet :) so happy there engaged..can't wait to read more
    July 2nd, 2015 at 11:07pm
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    Go Jayde go!!! I'm still lovin it!! Mr. Green
    June 26th, 2015 at 11:10am
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    @ wilda73
    I'm glad youre diggin it!
    June 25th, 2015 at 01:15am
  • wilda73

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    Yup! As good as the first one!!! Can't wait for more! Mr. Green
    June 24th, 2015 at 08:39am
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