fuckin l o v e this!
February 25th, 2017 at 09:11am
Till Tonight Do Us Part - Comments
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I really like this!December 20th, 2016 at 06:15am
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I loved this update. I can't wait to see more!December 20th, 2016 at 03:36am
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loved the updates!February 8th, 2016 at 01:56pm
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Summary:
I really love the summary and how it sets up the initial story. It made me excited to see what would happen within the story itself.
Prologue:
I love your writing style so much! You give a great deal of detail, but not overly so, which I really appreciated, because too much detail can really turn me off from a story. There's obvious chemistry between them and I loved reading their interactions.
Chapter One:
One thing that kind of turned me off from chapter one was the influx of characters. Despite this being a fanfiction, I don't know who these people are that you're writing about and descriptions would have been great for them.
Once again, I really love your dialogue between the characters, it flows so naturally.
I love your descriptions and the fact that I didn't see a single error when reading this, which was great. I wish you the best of luck with this!January 9th, 2016 at 10:02am -
BAM! I'm soooo excited that I found another Bam story! There are nowhere near enough of them around... this is really well written and you've got the characters down to perfection. I like that Ryan is in it aswell as the others of course.
You've got something good going here, the flow is good and I didn't come across anything that stopped me from reading. Well I'm subscribing and I can't wait to see where you take it!January 8th, 2016 at 08:20pm -
Summary This summary is really good and sets up the story very well without giving away the plot or everything about the character. Good job.
Prologue This is a great introduction to the story, the characters, and what's to come. I love the chemistry between the two of them.
Chapter One Another great part to the story you're building. I've yet to see a single mistake too, which is nice. I just love how everyone interacts, it's so effortless. I haven't told you yet, so I'll tell you now, you're a great writer, if not amazing.
Chapter Two I can't wait to read more of their antics. The introduction of Missy was great.
Chapter Three She's so reckless, it's actually quite entertaining and you really pull it off.
I hope you keep going with this as it's very well written and pretty interesting. Again, great job with what you have so far.January 6th, 2016 at 05:52am -
hope you update soon, this is amazing!September 5th, 2015 at 01:46pm
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hope you update soon, this is great!September 5th, 2015 at 01:45pm
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Hope you update soon!!August 18th, 2015 at 05:57am
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looking forward to it!July 20th, 2015 at 04:33pm
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@ will-you-pause
I'm very slllooowwwlllyyy working on a new chapter. I'll have it up as soon as possible, I promise! :)July 20th, 2015 at 07:14am -
update soon?July 20th, 2015 at 04:48am
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update soon?July 20th, 2015 at 04:48am
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@ will-you-pause
I should be updating once again in several hours or so! :)
Thank you for your comment! It made my day. ^.^June 27th, 2015 at 05:54pm -
I love that you update every day!
As far as stuff happening in Finland: hmm... Maybe she hooks up with Ville? Keeps Bam away and Missy happy, maybe?June 27th, 2015 at 08:45am -
I love that you update every day!
As far as stuff happening in Finland: hmm... Maybe she hooks up with Ville? Keeps Bam away and Missy happy, maybe?June 27th, 2015 at 08:45am -
@ will-you-pause
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! ^.^June 26th, 2015 at 08:07am -
loving it so far! :)June 26th, 2015 at 05:07am
