Bruises - Comments

  • warmaiden

    warmaiden (6085)

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    NaNoWriMo 2015
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    28
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    United States
    i really liked reading this as it's not every time you come across a story that involves a woman being the abuser. the layout was very simple & i love that as it enhances the story itself. idk if that sounds weird...but that's personally how i think. i will say, it felt like you put comma's where they weren't needed & it made reading the sentences a bit awkward. overall this is a very interesting drabble. very honest
    July 4th, 2015 at 10:48pm
  • dombelova

    dombelova (125)

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    Ghoul of 2016
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    26
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    I actually really love this because no one really does an abusive woman! And your writing style is truly fabulous! :)
    June 26th, 2015 at 07:38pm