First of all - I'm obsessed with this layout. I just think it fits perfectly with the title of your story and I notice the little odds and ends, ah. Secondly, I totally love where this is going. I really enjoyed the point of view and the direction it's heading in. I really want to know the significance behind 'R' and what happens, and I'm super excited. Not to mention your writing makes this such a pleasant read - I cannot wait for more.