I'd love to know the backstory to this, but I think you picked a perfect moment to write about. It's so mysterious and creepy and I have so many questions about that woman but it's awesome because it gives people a lot to think about, if that makes sense. We can make up our own story about who she is and I love that.
The only thing is this sentence: Blogging my path was a beautiful older woman. I feel like "blogging" should be "blocking".
This actually gave me chills. Very cool drabble, not something I would normally read, but for some reason it caught my attention on the stories list. I'm glad I read it; in 100 words, you definitely held my interest. Nice work :)
I'd love to know the backstory to this, but I think you picked a perfect moment to write about. It's so mysterious and creepy and I have so many questions about that woman but it's awesome because it gives people a lot to think about, if that makes sense. We can make up our own story about who she is and I love that.
The only thing is this sentence:
Blogging my path was a beautiful older woman.
I feel like "blogging" should be "blocking".
But other than that, wonderful!