There's a Light on in Chicago - Comments

IT BEGINSSSSS

(i agree, bones is so genuinely interesting, definitely one of the most unique characters i've ever seen, and she's so lovely <333)

i know i always quote your chapters but listen you always have such good one liners i can't help it.

"A detail about Bones is that when she’s happy, she’s fucking happy.
She beams, and she grins.
She radiates warmth.
I remember that night as being one of the first times I noticed that about her."

ahhh that part made me smile, it reminded me of the front bottoms song "flashlight", at the end there's a lyric that goes "when i'm sad, oh god i'm sad / but when i'm happy, i am happy" and it instantly made me think of that <33

"I bit my lip harder, tasting blood.
I really didn’t want to cry.
But that’s a tall order when you feel so exposed."

I really really really loved that part. it resonated with me so hard, idk how you do it <3

yes they are cute ;__; (and your descriptions are on point as always)

the description of Bones' house is perfect, like I couldn't imagine her living anywhere else. I can't wait to see how their relationship blossoms from here!!

I really like the way you write, it's very Pete. Also I really like the character of Bones, she's very mysterious, I like it. Keep up the good work.

this is so vivid, like when he mentions that it's like a scene where the camera doesn't stop rolling, that's exactly what I was picturing in my mind, just a huge long take of his trip. like the one in Goodfellas. this entire story feels like a dream.

ahhhhh I love love love your diction, your writing style, just the way you weave your words together. it's so captivating I can't get enough of it <3______<3

I just wanna say that I love the way you narrate this, it just sounds so much like Pete. I can't wait to see what happens once Bones enters the picture!!

i can't wait to see where this goes! update soon!

oh shit. ohhh shiiiit I used to LOVE this story! it's already so different than how I remember it and I love it. your writing is so infectious, I was hooked in as soon as I read "Her infamous smile dripped with notes of 'I hope you fucking die.'” I can't wait to see how you'll change it this time around!