Xenos - Comments

the straightforward tone of this piece is very strong & definitely a way i seek things. knowing someone for the beautiful person they are & suddenly being enveloped into a world of darkening change is frightening & something i personally can't handle, so relating to this as the protagonist speaks in such a way is something i feel a dense connection to. in all honesty, it feels as if im the one who said protagonist is describing as years back the change inside that made me into the person i am now drove away someone very close to me. least to say both we were both startled by e/o's new skin, but that's what life is about, as harsh as it seems.

The depth of my relation. I get this story so much because I've been there, I've watched such a thing happen and felt the same kind of hopelessness that I felt in the narrator's tone. You portrayed that heartbreak and almost betrayal so well with so little and it was both painful and beautiful. On one hand, I didn't want to know in fear that it'd be too much like my situation but on the other hand, I wanted to know the history behind these two and what happened. I still can't get over how well you provoked and portrayed all these emotions; I feel like a whirlwind and it happened to me years ago. This was so, so good.