this was so cute! kellin and vic are so silly they're so quick to jump into banter over silly things like music volume and nicknames, it's darling. ((and just the small inclusion of justin made me squeak because i adore that lil one )) i love their dynamic, and their separate characters – they don't rely on each other to show some personality to the readers.
the ending was just so cute. kellin's jUST GONNA WATCH HIM STRUGGLE GEEZ I THOIGHT YOU DIDN'T WANT HIM TO HATE YOU?? ((i also like the "i didn't think goths were christians" line because i always find it interesting if a character's faith is mentioned. not sure why, but, yeah, aha.)) i really liked this, it was darling; you did a great job!
i'm glad you liked it!