The Edge of Tonight - Comments

  • hopeless1313

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    I just found this story tonight and really liked what you have so far. I know it has been a long time since you have updated it , but I wanted to let you know that I'd love to read more if you choose to keep it going!
    May 30th, 2017 at 08:58am
  • Nanook

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    So I just found this story and decided to check it out.
    First of all, I must give kudos for the long chapters. Two chapters only and I feel like it's the equivalent of four for a story I typically read. So that's awesome that you write long ones like that and don't split them up. :)
    This story is just beginning so it's hard to give much on what I think of it just yet, but I must say that the title of this story attracted me to it, before seeing it was an ATL fan fic fully. Because for all I knew, you just maybe used an ATL inspired title, or coincidently titled it the same as an ATL song.
    But anyway, when I looked at the title I immediately thought of the lyrics to the ATL song, so I was like, aww. lol. Because it's a very sweet song. And so, I decided to give the story a chance, because if it goes along with the song's meaning, well, that'll probably make for a very sweet story. :)
    I'm surprised this doesn't have any comments yet. Because even though it's just beginning, I can already tell you're a great writer just with the long chapters as well as just reading through each chapter and enjoying them. :)
    I'm sad that this wasn't continued, though. I wanted to leave a comment letting you know that if you choose to continue, I will be here to read. :) I really hope you do because I think it sounds very promising so far.
    Maybe this comment will inspire you to continue. :)
    January 11th, 2016 at 06:28am