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    bellamy blake (3280)

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    AGH ALEX, I FRIGGIN’ ADORED THIS!
    Anyways, serious face now. Even though you’re not as confident about it, I feel like this was definitely the perfect, feel-good summertime fluff tehe I love how you involved the different members of the family and how it became more about Jaxon and Isabelle bonding than it was about Justin, which was definitely refreshing. At the same time, with that little moment between Pattie and Isabelle, it really brought things around full-circle and showed how important it was for Isabelle to feel a connection to Justin’s family because she loves him so much.

    On a more technical note, I feel like your dialogue was completely spot-on in this.

    But yeah, I can’t wait to see all the other things you come up with for these challenges tehe
    July 13th, 2015 at 03:37pm