Contest comment. (P.S-Im very sick so I'm doing my best with the comment, horrible cough and throat pain.)
So I've found a few errors, nothing big but can see them.
steering while Did you mean steering wheel?
25 just one more minutes
didn’t recognize at her first.
lost the them
Those are some of the few, there weren't many.
The summary was short. But to the point. I don't mind those because I do those types of summaries all the time. I read from mobile so there was no seeing the layout. I do that because I don't like to just comment on that. So far so good, I do like the relationship between the sisters. Your description is really good, not to little but not overly drawn out. I like Gabriel and how he points out a few obvious things, but doesn't argue with her. I feel bad that because of Aurora she always has to move or get involved in things that she clearly doesn't want to be involved in. Over all this was very good :)
So I've found a few errors, nothing big but can see them.
steering while
Did you mean steering wheel?
25 just one more minutes
didn’t recognize at her first.
lost the them
Those are some of the few, there weren't many.
The summary was short. But to the point. I don't mind those because I do those types of summaries all the time. I read from mobile so there was no seeing the layout. I do that because I don't like to just comment on that. So far so good, I do like the relationship between the sisters. Your description is really good, not to little but not overly drawn out.
I like Gabriel and how he points out a few obvious things, but doesn't argue with her. I feel bad that because of Aurora she always has to move or get involved in things that she clearly doesn't want to be involved in.
Over all this was very good :)