hmmm, what to say. I suppose it is good, but ig your not gonna post again for ages it's the kind of chapter I wouldn't have put up considering nothing much really happen apart that you letting on that Ellie might be Paige. Apart from that it is still very interesting. There were a like two errors i picked out, you should go look for them. So yeah, feed back. he he =D
You have kept everyone waiting long enough hury p and write. i know that your busy with the wedding story but yu have 15 more days before you hav to finish. SO WRITE!!!!!!!
yay i like it! even more now :) tina sounds awesome, i'd like to meet her. and poor ellie, having to go up there and talk about herself... even when you DO know stuff about yourself, that's awkward to do.
yay! she's alive! too bad about the amnesia, though. i like the name ellie. that nurse sounds like she badly needs to get that freaking pole out of her ass... but ... :) keep it up! me like.