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  • Clo2612

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    I'm not sure how I found this, but I'm glad I did. I teared up a bit at the end. It's written so beautifully.
    September 28th, 2017 at 08:41pm
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    This is really good, the detail you give and the way the story flows nicely. I'm surprised that this doesn't have more feedback to be honest, it's raw and just awesome.
    September 25th, 2015 at 02:42pm
  • Dlouey

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    I loved this. Not because the writer is my daughter in law but because it is truly great! Smile
    July 14th, 2015 at 04:34pm
  • goatman

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    This is so good, omg. From your tone, the characterization of the night and each of the characters (the mother, the baby, the cat even) is just so dark and desperate, it is amazing. I really enjoyed this. I'm really glad I found it.
    July 14th, 2015 at 03:22am
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