Psych Ward Stories - Comments

@ RiotGurl
It is a true story, yes

Was this a true story. It almost seemed like it might be! Either way it was wonderful, brave, and hopeful. *Big cyber hugs*

I'm liking this story but the only problem I find is the dialogue. When someone new speaks, try breaking that into a new paragraph instead of keeping it all in one paragraph because it seems to disrupt the flow and it gets confusing trying to tell who's speaking.

Going home!!!! Yay.

Whoahhhhh now. I missed a bunch. All caught up now. Who was secret visitor I wonder? Why was boyfreind upset?
I do love Christy... even though she ate a magnate.

This is so good, because it's so relatable. Ugh! Keep going ! <3

@ KokiriKid

Exactly. No one died and I didn't hit anything. They failed me twice in Missouri. Came to Maine. Bam, got in on the first try.

@ RiotGurl
//laughing uncontrollably. "Jeez, lady. I was just showing you how good the brakes are."

I know those driving instructors. I had this woman who took points off for stopping to abruptly. What the eff. >.<

Something suspicious happening? *raises eyebrow*

Sounding good so far!