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  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    I loved this. I feel like I say this every time I comment on a story of yours but they're all amazong sooo.

    I really liked the mixture of languages you had in this drabble. I always find it really fascinating to read different languages worked into stories, especially because I never have any idea what they're saying and it's cool to see the descriptions that you add to kind of explain what you're saying, if that makes sense.

    I also liked how you ended it. I feel like it really goves us a glimpse into the personality of the character by saying that he holds his head high even after everything he's been through.

    Fantastix job, as always!
    November 24th, 2015 at 12:16am