August 20th, 2015 at 10:04am
THIS WAS SO GOOD DO NOT BE NERVOUS I LOVED IT!!!!! LIKE!!!! IT WAS SO CUTE AND MY HEART BROKE FOR MYSELF WHEN I WAS UPSET AND NAMJOON JUST WANTED ME TO BE HAPPY AND THEN JIMIN AND JUNGKOOK BLESS THEM THEY ARE PRECIOUS BEANS IN THIS WORLD AND THEN THE END!!!!!! I CHOKED ON MY STRAW!!!!
I LOVED IT SO MUCH I'M UPSET AND THEN THE BANNER AND THE GIF AT THE BOTTOM I AM DEAD I'M DYING THANK YOU BBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She's right! I think this one-shot flowed well and I adored the layout - it's so cute and pretty in contrast to Rap Mon's bad-ass appearance which already hints that this will show his down-to-Earth, softer side.
I thought that the examples of comments from evil netz was really powerful - it was scary to imagine how real this kind of situation could be and has been in the past.
However while the story demonstrates so well how a famous relationship can turn sour due to hatred from jealous onlookers, it also does a 180 and turns things back around to show that Namjoon and Carese can figure out the problem together as one - that she just needed some time to deal with the emotion she'd been storing, and that love is powerful.
You conveyed their feelings beautifully, nice work!