Glad that Luis stood up for Riley! Boarding school seems like a real drag. I would love to get to know Riley better. I feel like the chapters have described the events of his day really well, but our man character remains a bit of a mystery. I am a sucker dor inner monolog and being inside of a characters head. Maybe flesh our this boys personality a bit more? :)
How the hell does this not have comments. You rock at describing things. M/M pairings are not normally my thing, but you sucked me in. Would love another chapter.