Dance D'Amour - Comments

LOL if only Mibba would up their server support and resolve these painfully obnoxious issues.

Ugh, double post. :)

MyVenusDoom:

Aleksi's got game lol. Very cute first introduction. I take it we have our love interest? :D

For critique, watch the past and present tense switch up. I catch myself doing it all the time, and I've noticed it a few times in this story. I know you'll work that out in the rewrite. It's tough in this format!

Haha yesss, we have our love interest :)

Thank you. I know I struggle with that a lot. I will do my best to not be doing that in the next part. :)

Aleksi's got game lol. Very cute first introduction. I take it we have our love interest? :D

For critique, watch the past and present tense switch up. I catch myself doing it all the time, and I've noticed it a few times in this story. I know you'll work that out in the rewrite. It's tough in this format!