In my opinion, your most recent chapter has an even bigger cliffhanger than when Paulina and Harry met two chapters ago! The revelation that she enjoyed the kiss and Francis has women on the side just has me sitting on pins and needles. I love your story and your ability to make the characters come to life! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
I am so nervous for Tuesday! I'm currently studying abroad and have been bugging my fellow American students for the past few weeks to send in their absentee ballots cause this is not the year for them to forget. Really loving your story and the liberalness that comes through haha Paulina is one of my favorite characters! You are a super talented writer and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next with these two.
Oh my goodness for whatever reason I haven't got notifications for the past two chapter updates and I get on to see new stuff! It's like an early birthday present! Such a wonderful chapter and the ending? You think this is some sick game? How dare you cliffhanger us with that ending?!
Also loved the Alistair bits and can't help but giggle despite all the drama of everything. Shit's going to get so real. I can't fucking wait for it. haha.
Reading you reignites my love for writing. It might not sound like much, but it’s one of the best compliments I think I could give. I've read a few books this summer and none of them managed to do that.
I waited until night time after a hot shower and a cup of tea to read this chapter because I wanted no distractions, and it was so worth the wait! I've been waiting for this moment for forever now. You can just feel all of the old emotions and the ups and downs that they've been through in their conversation. How can only a couple of sentences carry so much emotion?? Ahhh!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!
I feel so totally invested in this relationship, and I am so happy they're finally back in the same place together!! I cannot wait to see how it all pans out :D
I've been following Harry and Paulina from the beginning; the ups, the downs, and everything in between have all been leading up to this and I cannot be anymore excited. Now we've just got to see how you're going to tie it all together writing the next part of their story. Love it.
I'm really sad to say that I really can't stand Paulina anymore. She used to be one of my favorite characters but now she's just a selfish, cold bitch who really only cares about herself and her own desires. She thinks briefly about others like she still has some redeeming qualities about her, but in the end she still goes back to her own self serving desires. She thinks about Harry's feelings and what he's going through for a few moments and then it all goes back to herself and her career.